The line graph represents the trend of the bonus payments made by three different sectors, namely; finance and insurance, rest of economy and whole economy from 2001 to 2016 in the UK. The units are measured in billions of pound sterling.
Overall, the total bonus payments have increased for all sectors. Whole economy was paid the highest bonus payments in overall and this remained at its dominance for more than 15 years of periods.
Whole economy paid the highest total bonus payments to its employees. In 2001, it was about 22 billion pounds before it drastically rose to its peak of 40 billion pounds in 2007 and then the amount dropped to around 30 billion pounds by 2008. From 2008 to 2016, the total amount of bonus paid by whole economy steadily increased back to over 40 billion pounds.
Meanwhile, finance and insurance, and rest of economy were the second and the third highest bonus payments, which had the similar trend with the whole economy. The bonus payments recorded for the rest of economy was about 15 billion pounds and 10 billion pounds for finance and insurance in the beginning of the financial year, by 2008 it had the peak to reach at about 22 billion and close to 20 billion pound sterling respectively. While the rest of economy had shown the constant incremental trend after 2008 to end at over 30 billion pound, the finance and insurance sector had declined to around 12 billion pound and remained at the similar figure until 2016.
The line graph represents the trend of the
bonus
payments
made by three
different
sectors,
namely
;
finance
and
insurance
,
rest
of
economy
and
whole
economy
from 2001 to 2016 in the UK. The units
are measured
in
billions
of pound sterling.
Overall
, the total
bonus
payments
have increased for all sectors.
Whole
economy
was paid
the highest
bonus
payments
in
overall
and this remained at its dominance for more than 15 years of periods.
Whole
economy
paid the highest total
bonus
payments
to its employees. In 2001, it was about 22
billion
pounds
before
it
drastically
rose to its peak of 40
billion
pounds in 2007 and then the amount dropped to around 30
billion
pounds by 2008. From 2008 to 2016, the total amount of
bonus
paid by
whole
economy
steadily
increased back to over 40
billion
pounds.
Meanwhile,
finance
and
insurance
, and
rest
of
economy
were the second and the third highest
bonus
payments
, which had the similar trend with the
whole
economy
. The
bonus
payments
recorded for the
rest
of
economy
was about 15
billion
pounds and 10
billion
pounds for
finance
and
insurance
in the beginning of the financial year, by 2008 it had the peak to reach at about 22
billion
and close to 20
billion
pound sterling
respectively
. While the
rest
of
economy
had shown the constant incremental trend after 2008 to
end
at over 30
billion
pound
, the
finance
and
insurance
sector had declined to around 12
billion
pound
and remained at the similar figure until 2016.
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