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The diagram bellow shows how geometrical energy is used to produce electricity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. v.2

The diagram bellow shows how geometrical energy is used to produce electricity.
Given is a diagram concerning a process through which electricity is produced by geometrical energy. From the illustration supplied, it is evident that there are five main phrases involved. At the first stage, stored cold water through the injection well is pumped down to the Earth where hot stones are available. By passing the geothermal zone, water reaches a higher temperature and with the help of a production well, subsequently rise towards a cubic container to condense. During the mentioned procedure, the supplied steam is extracted from water. The gathered stream is transferred to another box contained turbine and generator to rotate the turbine with its energy which eventually leads to electricity production by the generator. Afterwards, the provided energy is ready to consume in cable networks. Overall, the diagram indicates a linear process resulting electricity from a renewable source of energy in a 5-stage process. This energy activates cable network system.
Given
is a diagram concerning a process through which electricity
is produced
by geometrical
energy
. From the illustration supplied, it is evident that there are five main phrases involved.

At the
first
stage, stored
cold
water through the injection well
is pumped
down to the Earth where hot stones are available. By passing the geothermal zone, water reaches a higher temperature and with the
help
of a production well,
subsequently
rise towards a cubic container to condense. During the mentioned procedure, the supplied steam
is extracted
from water. The gathered stream
is transferred
to another box contained turbine and generator to rotate the turbine with its
energy
which
eventually
leads to electricity production by the generator. Afterwards, the provided
energy
is ready to consume in cable networks.

Overall
, the diagram indicates a linear process resulting electricity from a renewable source of
energy
in a 5-stage process. This
energy
activates cable network system.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic The diagram bellow shows how geometrical energy is used to produce electricity.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
152 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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