There is no doubt that crime is always a very hot problem but now, the ways to find effective remedies for sinners is a more difficult issue. It is said that offenders should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. Personally, I totally strike a blow for this.
First of all, nobody in the world is perfect, sometimes they are wrong. Therefore, depending on the seriousness, they should be forgiven and given another chance to turn over a new leaf. Moreover, not every criminal is bad. Some committed felonies due to their miserable fate. For example, a teenager stole money from a store because his sister was ill and she needed to be operated on. That is why he was put into jail. Maybe, he deserves a second opportunity to alter his life.
Apart from that, when sinners are allowed to do unpaid work such as: cleaning streets, planting trees and so on, they will have a chance to experience things that they have never tried before. As a result, offenders will appreciate labor as well as regret having done wrong deeds in the past. They are likely to do good things when they are free. Everybody around can change their thoughts about these sinners. For instance, in " Healer" - a very famous Korean film and my most favourite film, there is a man who had been sentenced to seven years in prison for stealing. However, by being given chance to take part in unpaid jobs, he understood a lot of meaningful things. After being released, he works at a coffee shop and becomes a friendly and kind-hearted person. Naturally, miracles have occurred to those who used to do evils.
To sum up, I think that offenders should be given chance to do community work instead of being put behind bars. This will make great contribution to decreasing sinners in society.
There is no doubt that crime is always a
very
hot problem
but
now
, the ways to find effective remedies for sinners is a more difficult issue. It
is said
that offenders should
be made
to do unpaid community
work
instead
of
being put
behind bars.
Personally
, I
totally
strike a blow for this.
First of all
, nobody in the world is perfect,
sometimes
they are
wrong
.
Therefore
, depending on the seriousness, they should
be forgiven
and
given
another chance to turn over a new leaf.
Moreover
, not every criminal is
bad
.
Some
committed felonies due to their miserable fate.
For example
, a
teenager
stole money from a store
because
his sister was
ill and
she needed to
be operated
on.
That is
why he
was put
into jail. Maybe, he deserves a second opportunity to alter his life.
Apart from that, when sinners are
allowed
to do unpaid
work
such as: cleaning streets, planting trees and
so
on, they will have a chance to experience things that they have never tried
before
.
As a result
, offenders will appreciate labor
as well
as regret having done
wrong
deeds in the past. They are likely to do
good
things when they are free. Everybody around can
change
their thoughts about these sinners.
For instance
, in
"
;
Healer"
;
-
a
very
famous
Korean film and my most
favourite
film, there is a
man
who had
been sentenced
to seven years in prison for stealing.
However
, by being
given
chance to
take part
in unpaid jobs, he understood
a lot of
meaningful things. After
being released
, he works at a coffee shop and becomes a friendly and kind-hearted person.
Naturally
, miracles have occurred to those who
used
to do evils.
To sum up, I
think
that offenders should be
given
chance to do community
work
instead
of
being put
behind bars. This will
make
great contribution to decreasing sinners in society.