Dear Sir,
I am Catherine, a student at Sydney University pursuing B. Sc Biochemistry 2nd year. I am writing this letter to seek your assistance as I lost my student Identity card which is important to survive in the country.
In detail, on 18th August, precisely at 9. 44 AM, I got into the local metro train from Berkely station to the University. Soon after four stations, a thief got into our compartment who had stolen many important things from the passengers and in the same incident, I lost my College ID card. As he wore masks and goggles, we could not identify his features. Moreover, he dropped out of the running train.
However, I immediately notified the occurrence to the university dean and he suggested me to report it to the police station and have a copy of the report to apply for a new ID card.
I would be much obliged if you kindly register my lost ID case and provide me with a copy of that.
Looking forward to your swift response.
Yours faithfully,
Catherine Grace
Dear Sir,
I am Catherine, a student at Sydney University pursuing
B. Sc
Biochemistry 2nd year. I am writing this letter to seek your assistance as I lost my student Identity card which is
important
to survive in the country.
In detail, on 18th August,
precisely
at 9. 44 AM, I
got
into the local metro train from
Berkely
station to the University.
Soon
after four stations, a thief
got
into our compartment who had stolen
many
important
things from the passengers and in the same incident, I lost my College ID card. As he wore masks and goggles, we could not identify his features.
Moreover
, he dropped out of the running train.
However
, I immediately notified the occurrence to the university
dean and
he suggested me to report it to the police station and have a copy of the report to apply for a new ID card.
I would be much obliged if you kindly register my lost ID case and provide me with a copy of that.
Looking forward to your swift response.
Yours
faithfully
,
Catherine Grace
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