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You are a student of university of sydney. your identity card has been stolen. Write a letter to local police station giving details of who are you. What happened and asking what should you do to get a new identity card. v.2

You are a student of university of sydney. your identity card has been stolen. Write a letter to local police station giving details of who are you. What happened and asking what should you do to get a new identity card. v. 2
Dear Sir, I am Catherine, a student at Sydney University pursuing B. Sc Biochemistry 2nd year. I am writing this letter to seek your assistance as I lost my student Identity card which is important to survive in the country. In detail, on 18th August, precisely at 9. 44 AM, I got into the local metro train from Berkely station to the University. Soon after four stations, a thief got into our compartment who had stolen many important things from the passengers and in the same incident, I lost my College ID card. As he wore masks and goggles, we could not identify his features. Moreover, he dropped out of the running train. However, I immediately notified the occurrence to the university dean and he suggested me to report it to the police station and have a copy of the report to apply for a new ID card. I would be much obliged if you kindly register my lost ID case and provide me with a copy of that. Looking forward to your swift response. Yours faithfully, Catherine Grace
Dear Sir,

I am Catherine, a student at Sydney University pursuing
B. Sc
Biochemistry 2nd year. I am writing this letter to seek your assistance as I lost my student Identity card which is
important
to survive in the country.

In detail, on 18th August,
precisely
at 9. 44 AM, I
got
into the local metro train from
Berkely
station to the University.
Soon
after four stations, a thief
got
into our compartment who had stolen
many
important
things from the passengers and in the same incident, I lost my College ID card. As he wore masks and goggles, we could not identify his features.
Moreover
, he dropped out of the running train.

However
, I immediately notified the occurrence to the university
dean and
he suggested me to report it to the police station and have a copy of the report to apply for a new ID card.

I would be much obliged if you kindly register my lost ID case and provide me with a copy of that.

Looking forward to your swift response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Catherine Grace
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic You are a student of university of sydney. your identity card has been stolen. Write a letter to local police station giving details of who are you. What happened and asking what should you do to get a new identity card. v. 2

Academic
  American English
8 paragraphs
178 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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