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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005.
The given line chart illustrates the figure for 3 sources of air pollutants measured in the UK during the period 1990 to 2005. It is clear that there was an upward movement in the total number of air pollutants in the UK over the 15- year period. Furthermore, the decline in air pollutants from industry sources was particularly significant. Looking at the information in more detail, in 1990, the total amount of air pollutants was exactly 7 million tonnes in the UK. After 9 years there was a significant decrease in the total number of air pollutants to figure for approximately 4 million tonnes and then continued to fall to about 3 million tonnes in 2005. As illustrated, in 1990, industry sources accounted for roughly 5 million tonnes in the number of air pollutants in the UK, compared to just under a million tonnes from both transport and household. In 1996, the total amount of industry sources reached the 3 million tonnes mark, which was nearly triple as high as that for transport( around 1million tonne). At the end of the period, the air pollutants did not change position in relation to each other as industry sources accounted for 2 million tonnes, following by a million tone from transport and under a haft of a million tone from household.
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line chart illustrates the figure for 3
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sources
of
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air
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pollutants
measured in the UK during the period 1990 to 2005.

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clear
that there was an upward movement in the
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total
number of
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air
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pollutants
in the UK over the 15- year period.
Furthermore
, the decline in
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air
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pollutants
from
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industry
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sources
was
particularly
significant.

Looking at the information in more detail, in 1990, the
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total
amount of
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air
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pollutants
was exactly 7
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million
tonnes in the UK. After 9 years there was a significant decrease in the
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total
number of
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air
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pollutants
to figure for approximately 4
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million
tonnes and then continued to fall to about 3
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million
tonnes in 2005.

As illustrated, in 1990,
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industry
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sources
accounted for roughly 5
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million
tonnes in the number of
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air
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pollutants
in the UK, compared to
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under a
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million
tonnes from both transport and household. In 1996, the
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total
amount of
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industry
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sources
reached the 3
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million
tonnes mark, which was
nearly
triple as high as that for transport
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(
around
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1million
tonne). At the
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end
of the period, the
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air
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pollutants
did not
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position in relation to each other as
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industry
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sources
accounted for 2
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million
tonnes, following by a
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million
tone from transport and under a haft of a
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million
tone from household.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS academic The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005.

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4 paragraphs
219 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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