Dear Samira,
How are you doing? Hope this letter finds you in pink of your health.
I got your letter yesterday and am so excited to learn that you will be joining my University. we can now again be together. As of now there is no vacancy in my room but my other roommate is going to shift out once this semester ends. At that time you can shift with me and we can again be the roommates. Till that time I will find some place for you to stay, probably a PG next to my hostel, so that at least we can commute together.
As you will be arriving in last week of this month and winter starts soon make sure you pack enough warm clothes in your bag. Take extra care to stuff more caps and socks as it gets very cold out here and you don' t want to wear wet clothes.
Look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Praj
Dear
Samira
,
How are you doing? Hope this letter finds you in pink of your health.
I
got
your letter yesterday and am
so
excited to learn that you will be joining my University.
we
can
now
again be together. As of
now
there is no vacancy in my room
but
my other roommate is going to shift out once this semester ends. At that time you can shift with
me and
we can again be the roommates. Till that time I will find
some
place for you to stay,
probably
a PG
next
to my hostel,
so
that at least we can commute together.
As you will be arriving in last week of this month and winter
starts
soon
make
sure you pack
enough
warm clothes in your bag. Take extra care to stuff more caps and socks as it
gets
very
cold
out here and you
don&
#039; t want to wear wet clothes.
Look forward
to hear
from you
soon
.
Yours
sincerely
,
Praj
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