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Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - offer to find somewhere to stay- give advice about what to do- give information about what clothes to bringWrite at least 150 words. v.11

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - offer to find somewhere to stay- give advice about what to do- give information about what clothes to bring v. 11
Dear Samira, How are you doing? Hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. I got your letter yesterday and am so excited to learn that you will be joining my University. we can now again be together. As of now there is no vacancy in my room but my other roommate is going to shift out once this semester ends. At that time you can shift with me and we can again be the roommates. Till that time I will find some place for you to stay, probably a PG next to my hostel, so that at least we can commute together. As you will be arriving in last week of this month and winter starts soon make sure you pack enough warm clothes in your bag. Take extra care to stuff more caps and socks as it gets very cold out here and you don' t want to wear wet clothes. Look forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Praj
Dear
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Samira
,

How are you doing? Hope this letter finds you in pink of your health.

I
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got
your letter yesterday and am
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so
excited to learn that you will be joining my University.
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we
can
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now
again be together. As of
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now
there is no vacancy in my room
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but
my other roommate is going to shift out once this semester ends. At that time you can shift with
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
me and
we can again be the roommates. Till that time I will find
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some
place for you to stay,
probably
a PG
next
to my hostel,
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so
that at least we can commute together.

As you will be arriving in last week of this month and winter
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starts
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soon
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make
sure you pack
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enough
warm clothes in your bag. Take extra care to stuff more caps and socks as it
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gets
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very
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cold
out here and you
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don&
#039; t want to wear wet clothes.

Look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Praj
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS academic Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - offer to find somewhere to stay- give advice about what to do- give information about what clothes to bring v. 11

Academic
  American English
7 paragraphs
164 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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