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The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words v.2

The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below v. 2
The given table illustrates data about the accommodation expenses per week and the annual wages in three different areas of London. Overall, it can be seen that although Nothing Hill is the most expensive in terms of renting a property, it is also the wealthiest among the given locations. Looking at the details, the 1-bed housing is far the cheapest among the three areas, with 375 pounds spent weekly on it in Nothing Hill, 325 in Regent' s Park and only 215 in Fulham. This amount doubles when it comes about a property with 3 beds in the first 2 areas. By contrast, people from Fulham have to pay 3 times the amount if they want to leave in a 3-bed property, as compared with the 1-bed one. With regards to the salaries, the trend matches the tendency in the level of rents for each area. The income for those living in 1-bed accommodation in Nothing Hill is slightly higher than that of dwellers of Regent' s Park, of 98. 500 and 85. 500 pounds per year, respectively. This is only half those who live in 3-bed places, with a salary of 194. 000 and 170. 500 pounds, respectively. However, in the least expensive area regarding the rents, this income is triple for those who have the largest accommodation as compared to those with those who have only 1 bed in their shelter.
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table illustrates data about the accommodation expenses per week and the annual wages in three
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different
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areas
of London.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that although Nothing Hill is the most expensive in terms of renting a property, it is
also
the wealthiest among the
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given
locations.

Looking at the
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details
, the
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1-bed
housing is far the cheapest among the three
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areas
, with
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375 pounds
spent weekly on it in Nothing Hill, 325 in
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Regent&
#039; s Park and
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only
215 in
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Fulham
. This amount doubles when it
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comes
about a property with 3
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beds
in the
first
2
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areas
. By contrast,
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people
from
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Fulham
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have to
pay 3 times the amount if they want to
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leave
in a
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3-bed
property, as compared with the
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1-bed
one.

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the salaries, the trend matches the tendency in the level of rents for each
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area
. The income for those living in
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1-bed
accommodation in Nothing Hill is
slightly
higher than that of dwellers of
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Regent&
#039; s Park, of 98. 500 and 85.
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500 pounds
per year,
respectively
. This is
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only
half those who
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live
in
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3-bed
places, with a salary of 194. 000 and 170.
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500 pounds
,
respectively
.
However
, in the least expensive
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area
regarding the rents, this income is triple for those who have the largest accommodation as compared to those with those who have
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only
1
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bed
in their shelter.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS academic The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below v. 2

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
233 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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