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This tables show data about the amount of television watched by children in different countries (hours per day ) and also the average academic achievement of people in these countries (% of people completing each level. ) v.2

This tables show data about the amount of television watched by children in different countries (hours per day ) and also the average academic achievement of people in these countries (% of people completing each level. ) v. 2
The given tables evince us some information about the number hours of watching TV in each day by young people, and the medium academic accomplishment in miscellaneous countries. Turning to the number hours of watching TV per day, the USA, the UK and Canada have the highest amount, with 4. For Each of countries of China and Italy, it is 3, standing at 2 in India and Brazil. The UAE and Malta have the minimum number, 1 hours/day, which is a quarter of the maximum recorded. According to table 2, we can see that the average percentage of people with academic achievement is categorized in three subdivision: school, high school, and university. By augmentation of education, this average decreases. From school to high school, this dives less than 10 unites in UK, Malta, UAE, Canada, Brazil, Italy and USA, dwindling 20% in India, slumping more than precedent percentage in China. This experiences huge drop from high school to university. It dips less than one-third in China, USA, Italy and UK, pluming a little more than one-third in Canada, sliding down more than a quarter in Brazil and UAE. In Malta and India, this tails off around 20%. In summary, it seems countries have more watching television hours/day, having more people completed university (except India).
The
given
tables evince us
some
information about the number hours of watching TV in each day by young
people
, and the medium academic accomplishment in miscellaneous countries.

Turning to the number hours of watching TV per day, the USA, the UK and Canada have the highest amount, with 4. For Each of countries of China and Italy, it is 3, standing at 2 in India and Brazil. The UAE and Malta have the minimum number, 1 hours/day, which is a quarter of the maximum recorded.

According to table 2, we can
see
that the average percentage of
people
with academic achievement
is categorized
in three subdivision:
school
, high
school
, and university. By augmentation of education, this average decreases. From
school
to high
school
, this dives less than 10 unites in UK, Malta, UAE, Canada, Brazil, Italy and USA, dwindling 20% in India, slumping more than precedent percentage in China. This experiences huge drop from high
school
to university. It dips less than one-third in China, USA, Italy and UK, pluming a
little
more than one-third in Canada, sliding down more than a quarter in Brazil and UAE. In Malta and India, this tails off around 20%.

In summary, it seems countries have more watching television hours/day, having more
people
completed university (except India).
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