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Uk graduates and postgraduates students who did not go to full-time work after leaving college in 2008. v.1

Uk graduates and postgraduates students who did not go to full-time work after leaving college in 2008. v. 1
The bar charts demonstrate the number in the UK of graduate and postgraduate students who are not full-time employees in different destinations in 2008. There are significantly more graduates than post graduates in all destinations, however, both graduates and postgraduates show that the highest number of students choose to continue studying. graduates doing part-time job, 17, 735, are considerably less than those in further study, 29, 665, whereas the number of postgraduates in part-time work, being 2, 535, is not far from the 2, 725 who chose further study. Voluntary work is the lowest destination in numbers for both graduates and postgraduates at 3, 500 and 345 respectively. Unemployment is rather high, falling just below part-time work for graduates at 16, 235 and relatively less for post-graduates at 1, 625. All in all, the stats for bothe are quite similar when ignoring the total number of each group, although there are little difference in how many doing part-time jobs.
The bar charts demonstrate the
number
in the UK of
graduate
and
postgraduate
students who are not full-time employees in
different
destinations in 2008. There are
significantly
more
graduates
than post
graduates
in all destinations,
however
, both
graduates
and
postgraduates
show
that the highest
number
of students choose to continue studying.

graduates
doing part-time job, 17, 735, are
considerably
less than those in
further
study, 29, 665, whereas the
number
of
postgraduates
in part-time work, being 2, 535, is not far from the 2, 725 who chose
further
study. Voluntary work is the lowest destination in
numbers
for both
graduates
and
postgraduates
at 3, 500 and 345
respectively
. Unemployment is
rather
high, falling
just
below part-time work for
graduates
at 16, 235 and
relatively
less for
post-graduates
at 1, 625.

All in all, the stats for
bothe
are quite similar when ignoring the total
number
of each group, although there are
little
difference in how
many
doing part-time jobs.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic Uk graduates and postgraduates students who did not go to full-time work after leaving college in 2008. v. 1

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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