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The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households inthree income categories as a proportion of their income. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant. v.2

The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households inthree income categories as a proportion of their income.
The bar chart details the percentage of money that was spent in the household according to three different levels of income. & nbsp; Focusing on housing and transport, both categories were the most popular at around 28% and 20% respectively. Those values were quite similar through low, medium and high household income. Looking at eating out, entertainment and education, it is clear from the data that those three categories were the least popular. What is more, education accounted for approximately 5% (average of low. medium and high household income) which is almost one-sixth of the percentage of housing (28%). Overall, an important pattern is revealed in the bar chart. Housing and transport are the categories which more people’s money. & nbsp;
The bar chart
details
the percentage of money that
was spent
in the household according to three
different
levels of income.
&amp
;
nbsp
;

Focusing on housing and transport, both categories were the most popular at around 28% and 20%
respectively
. Those values were quite similar through low, medium and high household income.

Looking at eating out, entertainment and education, it is
clear
from the data that those three categories were the least popular.
What is more
, education accounted for approximately 5% (average of low.
medium
and high household income) which is almost one-sixth of the percentage of housing (28%).

Overall
, an
important
pattern
is revealed
in the bar chart. Housing and transport are the categories which more
people
’s money.
&amp
;
nbsp
;
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households inthree income categories as a proportion of their income.

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