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Two images are shown which shows the Islip town centre at present and the other is the planned development or the same. Write description by selecting relevant features and make comparisons where necessary. v.2

Two images are shown which shows the Islip town centre at present and the other is the planned development or the same. Write description by selecting relevant features and make comparisons where necessary. v. 2
The two images describe the maps of Islip town centre at present and the planning of development of the town centre. A row of number of shops are built at both the sides of the main road. The northern region of the main road is the countryside. The road from western part gets diverged into two parts, one is the main road and other ends at the school. Accomodation for living in a house is provided at north and south after the end of the road. A huge park is constructed besides housing from which the road gets combined with the main road. The planned development of the town centre has various facilities surrounded by a road. Bus station, shopping centre and car park are together in a row. A space for pedestrians only was constructed at the southern part of the row. The two rows of shops at present are reduced to only one row of shop at the centre of the town. Dual carraigeaway facility has been added at western side of the plan. New housing facility along with housing accomodation is provided at left hand side of the park and besides the row of car parking. The size of the park is substantially decreased than the one at present. Overall, the planned development of Islip town centre has more commercial facilities compared to the town at present.
The two images
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describe
the maps of
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Islip
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town
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centre
at present and the planning of development of the
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town
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centre
.

A
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row
of number of shops
are built
at both the sides of the
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main
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road
. The northern region of the
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main
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road
is the countryside. The
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road
from western part
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gets
diverged into two parts, one is the
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main
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road
and other ends at the school.
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Accomodation
for living in a
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house
is provided
at north and south after the
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end
of the
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road
. A huge
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park
is constructed
besides
housing from which the
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road
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gets
combined with the
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main
road.

The planned development of the
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town
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centre
has various facilities surrounded by a
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road
. Bus station, shopping
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centre
and car
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park
are together in a
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row
. A space for pedestrians
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only
was constructed
at the southern part of the
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row
. The two
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rows
of shops at present are
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reduced
to
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only
one
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row
of shop at the
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centre
of the
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town
. Dual
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carraigeaway
facility has been
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added
at western side of the plan. New housing facility along with housing
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accomodation
is provided
at
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left hand
side of the
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park
and
besides
the
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row
of car parking. The size of the
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park
is
substantially
decreased than the one at present.

Overall
, the planned development of
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Islip
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town
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centre
has more commercial facilities compared to the
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town
at present.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes
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IELTS academic Two images are shown which shows the Islip town centre at present and the other is the planned development or the same. Write description by selecting relevant features and make comparisons where necessary. v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
230 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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