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The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school is planned for the area. The map shows to possible sites for the school. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.4

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school is planned for the area. The map shows to possible sites for the school.
The map illustrates the entire region and two proposed positions of a new school which will be constructed in Canterbury town. Generally, both locations express a lack of accessibility to the university zone. However, evident differences between their connections with other places can be easily witnessed. Turning to the detail, locating in the east and the south parts, respectively, neither S1 nor S2 is well-connected to the university, which is in the northern part of the town. Despite this similarity, S2, conveniently lying in the town centre and being surrounded by housing, becomes more approachable for local citizens rather than countryside-locating S1. Regarding to transportation, unlike S1, which borders to main road, S2 shows a lack of accessibility for people outside the centre due to its non-existence of traffic zone. Also, residents from Sturry may find S1, which is only 5 to the southwest, more favorable to visit. By contrast, with a 7-kilometer distance along a main road, S2 is more conveniently sited for people from the neighborhood of Chartham.
The map illustrates the entire region and two proposed positions of a new school which will
be constructed
in Canterbury town.

Generally
, both locations express a lack of accessibility to the university zone.
However
, evident differences between their connections with other places can be
easily
witnessed.

Turning to the detail, locating in the east and the south parts,
respectively
, neither S1 nor S2 is well-connected to the university, which is in the northern part of the town. Despite this similarity, S2,
conveniently
lying in the town
centre
and
being surrounded
by housing, becomes more approachable for local citizens
rather
than countryside-locating S1.

Regarding to
transportation, unlike S1, which borders to main road, S2
shows
a lack of accessibility for
people
outside the
centre
due to its non-existence of traffic zone.
Also
, residents from
Sturry
may find S1, which is
only
5 to the southwest, more favorable to visit. By contrast, with a 7-kilometer distance along a main road, S2 is more
conveniently
sited for
people
from the neighborhood of
Chartham
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS academic The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school is planned for the area. The map shows to possible sites for the school.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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