The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school is planned for the area. The map shows to possible sites for the school. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.4
The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school is planned for the area. The map shows to possible sites for the school. 
The map illustrates the entire region and two proposed positions of a new school which will be constructed in Canterbury town.
Generally, both locations express a lack of accessibility to the university zone. However, evident differences between their connections with other places can be easily witnessed.
Turning to the detail, locating in the east and the south parts, respectively, neither S1 nor S2 is well-connected to the university, which is in the northern part of the town. Despite this similarity, S2, conveniently lying in the town centre and being surrounded by housing, becomes more approachable for local citizens rather than countryside-locating S1.
Regarding to transportation, unlike S1, which borders to main road, S2 shows a lack of accessibility for people outside the centre due to its non-existence of traffic zone. Also, residents from Sturry may find S1, which is only 5 to the southwest, more favorable to visit. By contrast, with a 7-kilometer distance along a main road, S2 is more conveniently sited for people from the neighborhood of Chartham. 
The map illustrates the entire region and two proposed positions of a new school which will  
be constructed
 in Canterbury town. 
Generally
, both locations express a lack of accessibility to the university zone.  
However
, evident differences between their connections with other places can be  
easily
 witnessed.
Turning to the detail, locating in the east and the south parts,  
respectively
, neither S1 nor S2 is well-connected to the university, which is in the northern part of the town. Despite this similarity, S2,  
conveniently
 lying in the town  
centre
 and  
being surrounded
 by housing, becomes more approachable for local citizens  
rather
 than countryside-locating S1. 
Regarding to
 transportation, unlike S1, which borders to main road, S2  
shows
 a lack of accessibility for  
people
 outside the  
centre
 due to its non-existence of traffic zone.  
Also
, residents from  
Sturry
 may find S1, which is  
only
 5 to the southwest, more favorable to visit. By contrast, with a 7-kilometer distance along a main road, S2 is more  
conveniently
 sited for  
people
 from the neighborhood of  
Chartham
. 
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes