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Writing Task 1 (at least 150 words)The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. images: v.2

Writing Task 1 (at least 150 words)The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
The pie chart shows how dangerous waste products are managed in the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the United Kingdom. It compares five different methods overall and the figures are represented in percentage points. Recycling is the most popular method to deal with hazardous waste in the Republic of Korea with 69%, while in Sweden only 25% of waste are processed in the same way. In the United Kingdom, on the other hand, waste products are not recycled. Underground disposal is employed with the 82% of the waste in the United Kingdom, followed by Sweden with 55% and the Republic of Korea with 22%. Incineration is the third most common method to process dangerous waste in Sweden and the Republic of Korea with 20% and 9% respectively. However, in the United Kingdom only 2% of waste products are incinerated, which makes it one the last popular ways to manage waste in this country. The United Kingdom uses chemical treatments and dumps the waste at the sea an 8%. In contrast, the Republic of Korea and Sweden do not use those methods to deal with hazardous waste products.
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in the Republic of Korea with 69%, while in Sweden
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in the
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Kingdom, followed by Sweden with 55% and the Republic of Korea with 22%.

Incineration is the third most common
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in Sweden and the Republic of Korea with 20% and 9%
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IELTS academic Writing Task 1 (at least 150 words)The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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