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The maps below show changes in the Borrowmeade area in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The maps below show changes in the Borrowmeade area in recent times.
The two maps illustrate the main developments which have taken place in the Borrowmeade area between 1990 and today. In general, it seems that Borrowmeade has been modernised, with improved transport, accommodation, communication, entertainment, shopping and sports facilities. There also appears to have been significant population growth in the area as Borrowmeade is now a town rather than a village. One significant change is that Fickledore Forest has been cleared and replaced by a new climbing center. Furthermore, the area to the north of the town centre, which was a picnic and play area in 1990, has been developed into a holiday park. Another interesting change is that the transport links have been upgraded. In 1990, Borrowmeade had a bus stop. Today, it has a bus and rail service. A further transport development is that Village Road has been turned into a motorway. To the south of the motorway, the Borrowmeade Ski Centre has been redeveloped into a large winter sports facility. Notably, a phone tower has been erected to the south-east of the town to provide a better communication infrastructure. There has also been redevelopment to the west of the town centre, where Prichard' s Farmhouse has been knocked down and replaced by a modern cinema. Finally, the cornershop to the north-east of the town centre has been transformed into a department store.
The two maps illustrate the main developments which have taken place in the
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Borrowmeade
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area
between 1990 and
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today
.

In general
, it seems that
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Borrowmeade
has been
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modernised
, with
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improved
transport, accommodation, communication, entertainment, shopping and sports facilities. There
also
appears to have been significant population growth in the
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area
as
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Borrowmeade
is
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now
a
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town
rather
than a village.

One significant
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change
is that
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Fickledore
Forest has
been cleared
and replaced by a new climbing center.
Furthermore
, the
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area
to the north of the
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town
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centre
, which was a picnic and play
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area
in 1990, has
been developed
into a holiday park.

Another interesting
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change
is that the transport links have
been upgraded
. In 1990,
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Borrowmeade
had a bus
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stop
.
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Today
, it has a bus and rail service. A
further
transport development is that Village Road has
been turned
into a motorway. To the south of the motorway, the
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Borrowmeade
Ski
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Centre
has
been redeveloped
into a large winter sports facility.

Notably
, a phone tower has
been erected
to the south-east of the
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town
to provide a better communication infrastructure. There has
also
been redevelopment to the west of the
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town
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centre
, where
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Prichard&
#039; s Farmhouse has
been knocked
down and replaced by a modern cinema.
Finally
, the
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cornershop
to the north-east of the
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town
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centre
has
been transformed
into a department store.
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IELTS academic The maps below show changes in the Borrowmeade area in recent times.

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