The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed. v.1
The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed. v. 1
The given pie charts show data on world population, the spending of people in basic needs and their share of resource consumption. As is presented in the graph, people of the world spent most of their amount for their foods and more than half of the population lives in Asia whereas more than half of the resources are consumed by the USA and European people.
According to the first pie chart, people of the world on an average spent 24% on foods. In clothing, they spent 6% while this percentage is double for housing and triple for the transport. The remaining 40% is the combination of other categories for spending. The second pie chart shows that more than half of the world populations live in Asia continent while Europe & America have both only 14% of the total population. One-tenth of the world population lives in Africa and rest of the 5% people live in other places of the world. Finally, the third pie chart shows that though that 60% of world resources are consumed by the population of USA and Europe though their percentage is only 28% in total. The remaining 40% resources are shared among the rest of the 72% world population of other regions of the world.
The
given
pie
charts
show
data on
world
population
, the spending of
people
in basic needs and their share of
resource
consumption. As
is presented
in the graph,
people
of the
world
spent most of their amount for their foods and more than half of the
population
lives
in Asia whereas more than half of the resources
are consumed
by the USA and European
people
.
According to the
first
pie
chart
,
people
of the
world
on an average spent 24% on foods. In clothing, they spent 6% while this percentage is double for housing and triple for the transport. The remaining 40% is the combination of other categories for spending. The second
pie
chart
shows
that more than half of the
world
populations
live
in Asia continent while Europe & America have both
only
14% of the total
population
. One-tenth of the
world
population
lives
in Africa and rest of the 5%
people
live
in other places of the
world
.
Finally
, the third
pie
chart
shows
that though that 60% of
world
resources
are consumed
by the
population
of USA
and Europe though their percentage is
only
28% in total. The remaining 40% resources
are shared
among the rest of the 72%
world
population
of other regions of the
world
.
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