Look at two tables, we can see that one illustrates the changes in number of Japanese tourist travelling out of their country, the other informs the proportion of Japanese travellers come to Australia in the period of ten years.
Overall, it can be seen that the figure shape of both tables is virtually identical, compared the tops of the column table and the line in the later. While the number of tourists in Japan travel to others countries has a slightly decreased after 1990, the fallen happen two times by 1988 and 1993 in the chart showing percentages of Japanese visit Australia.
Except in 1991, the figures which presented numbers travelling abroad in Japan have a steady rise by year. By the end of 1995, the indicator hits the peak at over 15 million tourist, which is three-times as the number in 1985 (5 million). The same with the line chart, the latest statistic showed that the proportion of Japanese that visiting Australia has risen by 3 times, touched the goal 6%.
Look at two tables, we can
see
that one illustrates the
changes
in
number
of Japanese tourist travelling out of their country, the other informs the proportion of Japanese
travellers
come
to Australia in the period of ten years.
Overall
, it can be
seen
that the figure shape of both tables is
virtually
identical, compared the tops of the column table and the line in the
later
. While the
number
of tourists in Japan travel to others countries has a
slightly
decreased after 1990, the fallen happen two times by 1988 and 1993 in the chart showing percentages of Japanese visit Australia.
Except in 1991, the figures which presented
numbers
travelling abroad in Japan have a steady rise by year. By the
end
of 1995, the indicator hits the peak at over 15 million tourist, which is three-times as the
number
in 1985 (5 million). The same with the line chart, the latest statistic
showed
that the proportion of Japanese that visiting Australia has risen by 3 times, touched the goal 6%.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes