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This table shows how many people in millions used different form public transport in Milan between 2010 and 2014 v.2

This table shows how many people in millions used different form public transport in Milan between 2010 and 2014 v. 2
This table shows the rise in passenger transport in Milan from 2010 to 2014 in the bus, train, tram, taxi and metro networks. There was increased usage of all 5 forms of transport during this period and the metro was used more than any other mode of transport. In 2010 there were just 7. 3 million passengers using public transport in Milan, but by 2014 this figure had approximately doubled to over 14 million. The numbers rose for each form of transport every year with the exception of buses in 2011 when the figure dropped slightly from 1 million to 0. 8 million. The pattern of change was mostly steady with the two greatest changes being the rise in bus usage in 2012 and metro usage in 2011, where there was an increase of around 1 million in both cases. The greatest number of passengers used the metro and trains, the figures rising from 3 million to 5 million and 1. 4 million to 3. 6 million respectively. While more people used trams at the start of this period, bus transport had become more popular by 2013. Taxis accounted for the fewest number of journeys at 0. 6 to one million.
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the rise in passenger
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in Milan from 2010 to 2014 in the bus, train, tram, taxi and
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metro
networks. There
was increased
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transport
during this period and the
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was
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more than any other mode of transport.

In 2010 there were
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7. 3
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passengers using public
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in Milan,
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by 2014 this figure had approximately doubled to over 14
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million
. The numbers rose for each form of
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every year
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buses in 2011 when the figure dropped
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to 0. 8
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. The pattern of
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was
mostly
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being the rise in bus usage in 2012 and
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usage in 2011, where there was an increase of around 1
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million
in both cases.

The greatest number of passengers
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used
the
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and trains, the figures rising from 3
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to 5
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and 1. 4
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to 3. 6
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respectively
. While more
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people
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trams at the
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start
of this period, bus
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had become more popular by 2013. Taxis accounted for the fewest number of journeys at 0. 6 to one
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million
.
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IELTS academic This table shows how many people in millions used different form public transport in Milan between 2010 and 2014 v. 2

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