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the table shows how many people used different form public transport in million between 2010 and 2014. v.2

the table shows how many people used different form public transport in million between 2010 and 2014. v. 2
The given table depict the ratio of people who used distinct public transport from 2010 to 2014. The data is calibrated in million. The most striking feature to be observed is that matro was the most prevalent transport among people. It can be vividly seen that in, In 2010 the total number of passengers were 7. 3 million who used all types of transport system whereas the ratio was doubled in 2014 with 14 million people. The proportion of people were equally reported for trains and buses with 1. 8 million people in 2012. Turning to the rest of description, the figure of metro and trains rising slightly from 3 million to 5 million and 1. 4 million to 3. 6 million. As far as comparison is concerned the cabs stood at lowest position for transportation by masses compare to other public transport. Further, in case of trams, the number of rise slowly for the next three years than other public transport vehicle.
The
given
table depict the ratio of
people
who
used
distinct public
transport
from 2010 to 2014. The data
is calibrated
in
million
.

The
most striking feature to
be observed
is that
matro
was the most prevalent
transport
among
people
.

It can be
vividly
seen
that in, In 2010 the total number of passengers were 7. 3
million
who
used
all types of
transport
system whereas the ratio
was doubled
in 2014 with 14
million
people
. The proportion of
people
were
equally
reported for trains and buses with 1. 8
million
people
in 2012.

Turning to the rest of description, the figure of metro and trains rising
slightly
from 3
million
to 5
million
and 1. 4
million
to 3. 6
million
. As far as comparison
is concerned
the cabs stood at lowest position for transportation by masses compare to other public
transport
.
Further
, in case of trams, the number of rise
slowly
for the
next
three years than other public
transport
vehicle.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic the table shows how many people used different form public transport in million between 2010 and 2014. v. 2

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  American English
4 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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