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this flow chart clearly divides the process of getting driving lecense in uS into three main parts and describes the features of each part v.1

this flow chart clearly divides the process of getting driving lecense in uS into three main parts and describes the features of each part v. 1
The diagram compares two different methods of defences for homes which are at risk of being flooded. OVerall, the key difference between the diagrams is that they show flood protection with and without a stopbank. Moreover, the at-risk home is raised on stilts above ground level. The first diagram shows how a stopbank acts as a flood barrier to stop river water from flooding homes. The stp[bank is a small mound of land which is higher than the 100-year flood level, and halt the river from bursting its banks. Nearby houses can be built on stilts to prevent flooding from rainwater, and a floodgate beneath the stopbank can be opened all the water from internal ponding out when it is full. When there is no stopbank, as shown in the second diagram, the will be nothing to stop the river from flooding. In this case, the solution is to put buildings on stilts, The height of the stilts is measured so that the floor of the house is 300mm above the 100-year flood level
The diagram compares two
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different
methods of
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defences
for homes which are at
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risk
of
being flooded
.

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OVerall
, the key difference between the diagrams is that they
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show
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flood
protection with and without a
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stopbank
.
Moreover
, the at-
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risk
home
is raised
on
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stilts
above ground level.

The
first
diagram
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shows
how a
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stopbank
acts as a
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flood
barrier to
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stop
river water from flooding homes. The
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stp
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[
bank is a
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small
mound of land which is higher than the 100-year
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flood
level, and halt the river from bursting its banks. Nearby
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houses
can
be built
on
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stilts
to
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prevent
flooding from rainwater, and a floodgate beneath the
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stopbank
can
be opened
all the water from internal
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ponding
out when it is full.

When there is no
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stopbank
, as shown in the second diagram,
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the
will be nothing to
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stop
the river from flooding.
In this case
, the solution is to put buildings on
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stilts
, The height of the
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stilts
is measured
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so
that the floor of the
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house
is
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "300 mm"
300mm
above the 100-year
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flood
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level
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS academic this flow chart clearly divides the process of getting driving lecense in uS into three main parts and describes the features of each part v. 1

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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