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The flowchart below explain how laundry is handled. Using the information from the flow chart describe the laundry process. v.2

The flowchart below explain how laundry is handled. Using the information from the flow chart describe the laundry process. v. 2
The given flow chart illustrates the information about laundry lifting and it indicates about the various kind of steps which are used to fulfill a laundry process. It is crystal clear that firstly the laundry is collected by suppliers and in the next step towels and linens are separated from each other to send differently for further processing as well as laundry bags method is the third step to load the laundry in bags and these bags are transported and stacked to laundry machine. Moreover, after go through from previous four steps the washing cycle take place and it takes approximately two hours and the water which is used for washing, it is partially drained from the laundry. So, after finishing this process they dries towel completely and the linens keep little bit wet for ironing. At last process with the help of folding machines the laundry is transported. Overall, it indicates that all the divergent steps of laundry process is essential to complete this work at the end.
The
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given
flow chart illustrates the information about
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laundry
lifting and it indicates about the various kind of
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steps
which are
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used
to fulfill a
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laundry
process.

It is crystal
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clear
that
firstly
the
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laundry
is collected
by suppliers and in the
next
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step
towels and linens
are separated
from each other to
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send
differently
for
further
processing
as well
as
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laundry
bags method is the third
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step
to load the
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laundry
in bags and these bags
are transported
and stacked to
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laundry
machine.
Moreover
, after go through from previous four
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steps
the washing cycle take place and it takes approximately two hours and the water which is
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used
for washing, it is
partially
drained from the
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laundry
.
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So
, after finishing this process they
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dries
towel completely and the linens
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keep
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little bit
wet for ironing. At last process with the
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help
of folding machines the
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laundry
is transported
.

Overall
, it indicates that all the divergent
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steps
of
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laundry
process is essential to complete this work at the
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end
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic The flowchart below explain how laundry is handled. Using the information from the flow chart describe the laundry process. v. 2

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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