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The flow chart below shows the process involved in completing the work experience requirement for university students. v.1

The flow chart below shows the process involved in completing the work experience requirement for university students. v. 1
The given flow chart illustrates the steps to be concerned with gaining the work experience requirement for university students. Overall, the process includes a total of six stages, which are application, approval, schedule, reports, evaluation and final report. To begin with the application process, one has to select an interesting job location from the approved list and apply for the same. Once, you have been obtained the acceptance letter, concern it to a professor for their clearance. Then, you can confirm the work schedule of a minimum of 10 hours per week and for total 200 weeks. Meanwhile, submission of weekly progress report for each candidate is mandatory on every Friday. Apart from this, in final appraisal meeting with your work supervisor in the final workweek, you will be handed over evaluation form by your superior. Along with this evaluation form you have to submit the final report before last week of Spring term. Ultimately, you have been granted the work experience certificate by the university.
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with gaining the
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experience requirement for university students.

Overall
, the process includes a total of six stages, which are application, approval, schedule, reports, evaluation and
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final
report.

To
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begin
with the application process, one
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has to
select an interesting job location from the approved list and apply for the same. Once, you have
been obtained
the acceptance letter, concern it to a professor for their clearance. Then, you can confirm the
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work
schedule of a minimum of 10 hours per week and for total 200 weeks.

Meanwhile, submission of weekly progress report for each candidate is mandatory on every Friday. Apart from this, in
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final
appraisal meeting with your
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work
supervisor in the
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final
workweek, you will
be handed
over evaluation form by your superior. Along with this evaluation form you
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have to
submit the
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final
report
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before
last week of Spring term.
Ultimately
, you have
been granted
the
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work
experience certificate by the university.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS academic The flow chart below shows the process involved in completing the work experience requirement for university students. v. 1

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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