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The flow chart below explains how laundry is handled. Using information from the flow chart describe the laundry process v.2

The flow chart below explains how laundry is handled. Using information from the flow chart describe the laundry process v. 2
The flow chart illustrates the step-by-step process of handling a laundry. Apparently, there are nine or ten steps involved in handling laundry, and the number of steps depends on the type of fabric that are washed. First step is when the laundry is collected from the suppliers and it is separated into towels and linens. Next, the separated laundry is loaded into laundry bags, in which it is transported and loaded to the laundry machine. Following that, the washing cycle begins and it takes two hours from start to finish. When washing cycle ends, water is partially drained from the laundry by pressing. In this stage, towels are dried completely, whereas linens is left half-wet and ironed after. In the last step, both laundry are transported to folding machine. The entire process is almost similar for the two types of laundry. The only step that differs relates to the level of dryness of the laundered fabric.
The flow chart illustrates the step-by-step process of handling a laundry.

Apparently
, there are nine or ten
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steps
involved in handling
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laundry
, and the number of
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steps
depends on the type of fabric that
are washed
.

First
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step
is when the
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laundry
is collected
from the suppliers and it
is separated
into towels and linens.
Next
, the separated
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laundry
is loaded
into
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laundry
bags, in which it
is transported
and loaded to the
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laundry
machine. Following that, the washing cycle
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begins
and it takes two hours from
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start
to finish.

When washing cycle ends, water is
partially
drained from the
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laundry
by pressing. In this stage, towels
are dried
completely, whereas linens is
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left
half-wet and ironed after. In the last
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step
, both
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laundry
are transported
to folding machine.

The entire process is almost similar for the two types of
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laundry
. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
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step
that differs relates to the level of dryness of the laundered fabric.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic The flow chart below explains how laundry is handled. Using information from the flow chart describe the laundry process v. 2

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
156 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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