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The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016
The pie chart provide information about the sectors that have been important to the conomy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. First of all, as the first chart shows, the agriculture' s sector had the highest percentage of contribution with 24% in 2000, whereas the construction' s sector represented the lowest percentage with only 3%. However, even several other industry sections contributed to Turkey' s economy, such as Healthcare and Education, Trade, Utilities and Transportation, Leisure and Hospitality and Government with 17%, 14%, 17% and 12% respectively. Also Manufacturing and Finance, Business and Other with 8% and 5% gave their contribution. The second pie chart illustrates how the agriculture' s contribution had a fall of 14% in 2016, while Construction, Manufacturing, Trade, Utilities and Trasportation and Finance, Business and Other sectora had a slight increase reaching 10%, 12%, 16% and 8% respectively. What emerges is that Government and Leisure and Hospitality experienced a slight decrease of 9% and 14% respectively. In addiction, only Healthcare and Education' s section remained stable at 17% in 2016. Overall, the data indicate how the agriculture had a high role to the economy' s development of Turkey in 2000, whereas the Healthcare and Education became the most important sector in 2016.
The pie chart provide information about the
sectors
that have been
important
to the
conomy
of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

First of all
, as the
first
chart
shows
, the
agriculture&
#039; s
sector
had the highest percentage of contribution with 24% in 2000, whereas the
construction&
#039; s
sector
represented the lowest percentage with
only
3%.
However
, even several other industry sections contributed to
Turkey&
#039; s economy, such as Healthcare and Education, Trade, Utilities and Transportation, Leisure and Hospitality and
Government
with 17%, 14%, 17% and 12%
respectively
.
Also
Manufacturing and Finance, Business and Other with 8% and 5% gave their contribution.

The second pie chart illustrates how the
agriculture&
#039; s contribution had a fall of 14% in 2016, while Construction, Manufacturing, Trade, Utilities and
Trasportation
and Finance, Business and Other
sectora
had a slight increase reaching 10%, 12%, 16% and 8%
respectively
. What emerges is that
Government
and Leisure and Hospitality experienced a slight decrease of 9% and 14%
respectively
. In addiction,
only
Healthcare and
Education&
#039; s section remained stable at 17% in 2016.

Overall
, the data indicate how the agriculture had a high role to the
economy&
#039; s development of Turkey in 2000, whereas the Healthcare and Education became the most
important
sector
in 2016.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016

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