The diagram shows how fruit is canned Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2
The diagram shows how fruit is canned
The diagram depicts the process that pears undergo to be canned.
First of all, fruits are hand-picked from their trees. Then they are transported to the industry, where they are washed, checked and cold stored. The next sequence of images illustrates other different stages, where the pears are weighed, peeled, cored into smaller slices and finally they are canned into several cans. After that, the cans are sealed and put over a fire, where they can be sterilized and the pears can be cooked. Subsequently, the jars are labelled and they are carried to the storage, from where they are taken by trucks and despatched to the stores.
Overall, the process consists of fourteen stages, beginning with the harvest of fruits and ending up with the despatch to the shops.
The diagram depicts the process that pears undergo to
be canned
.
First of all
, fruits are hand-picked from their trees. Then they
are transported
to the industry, where they
are washed
,
checked
and
cold
stored. The
next
sequence of images illustrates other
different
stages, where the pears
are weighed
, peeled, cored into smaller slices and
finally
they
are canned
into several
cans
. After that, the
cans
are sealed
and put over a fire, where they
can
be sterilized
and the pears
can
be cooked
.
Subsequently
, the jars are
labelled and
they
are carried
to the storage, from where they
are taken
by trucks and despatched to the stores.
Overall
, the process consists of fourteen stages, beginning with the harvest of fruits and ending up with the despatch to the shops.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes