The both maps reveals the alternations in town of Denham in son of 1986 to the 2019.
it is vivid, the first map enumerates the whole land in the east of the river stoke, that land was used for agriculture purposes and there was two shops in side of post office which is now covered up by many homes which are newly built at present moment and it results increment of housing development. post office, bridge and school are still as same as those were in retro time.
Furthermore, in 1986 there was an large garden which was used for to see the beauty of farms with landscape of river stroke and there were few large homes that is now converted into retirement home for old age people and half of garden area occupied with new homes development which results the garden now got shortened which is better for elder people.
Overall, development of residences in soared in present day because of large population.
The both maps reveals the alternations in town of
Denham
in son of 1986 to the 2019.
it
is vivid, the
first
map enumerates the whole land in the east of the river stoke, that land was
used
for agriculture purposes and
there was two shops
in side of post office which is
now
covered up by
many
homes
which are
newly
built at present moment and it results increment of housing development.
post
office, bridge and school are
still
as same as those were in retro time.
Furthermore
, in 1986 there was
an
large garden which was
used
for to
see
the beauty of farms with landscape of river stroke and there were few large
homes
that is
now
converted into retirement home for
old
age
people
and half of garden area occupied with new
homes
development which results the garden
now
got
shortened which is better for elder
people
.
Overall
, development of residences
in soared in
present day
because
of large population.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes