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The charts show the percentage of British students at one university in England who are able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. v.2

The charts show the percentage of British students at one university in England who are able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. v. 2
The supplied pie charts give information on the change in the percentage of British students who are either bilingual or multilingual at an university in England over a decade between 2000 and 2010. As can be seen, the number of the students who were not able to speak any foreign languages decreased significantly over the 10-year period of time. Initially, in 2000, nearly the third of the students could speak Spanish, while the percentage of the students who were able to speak German in addition to English was as less as 10 per cent. The number of the students who were multilingual was also less, at 10 per cent. Then, 10 years later, these figures were changed substantially, except the number of the students who were able to speak German, remained the same at 10 per cent in 2010. The percentage of the students who were multilingual and could speak Spanish increased by 5 per cent reaching 15 and 35 per cents in 2010, respectively. Interestingly, the number of the students who were able to speak only English decreased as much as twice from 20 per cent in 2000 to 10 per cent in 2010. Overall, the charts indicate that the number of the students at an university in England who could speak foreign languages increased significantly over the 10-year period of time.
The supplied pie charts give information on the
change
in the percentage of British
students
who
are either bilingual or multilingual at
an
university in England over a decade between 2000 and 2010.

As can be
seen
, the
number
of the
students
who
were not
able
to
speak
any foreign languages decreased
significantly
over the 10-year period of time.

Initially
, in 2000,
nearly
the third of the
students
could
speak
Spanish, while the percentage of the
students
who
were
able
to
speak
German
in addition
to English was as
less
as
10 per cent. The
number
of the
students
who
were multilingual was
also
less, at 10 per cent.

Then, 10 years later, these figures were
changed
substantially
, except the
number
of the
students
who
were
able
to
speak
German, remained the same at 10 per cent in 2010. The percentage of the
students
who
were multilingual and could
speak
Spanish increased by 5 per cent reaching 15 and 35 per cents in 2010,
respectively
.

Interestingly
, the
number
of the
students
who
were
able
to
speak
only
English decreased as much as twice from 20 per cent in 2000 to 10 per cent in 2010.

Overall
, the charts indicate that the
number
of the
students
at
an
university in England
who
could
speak
foreign languages increased
significantly
over the 10-year period of time.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic The charts show the percentage of British students at one university in England who are able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. v. 2

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