The chart indicates the number of people who have heart attacks every year in the US. Describe the main feature of the chart and make comparison where relevant v.2
The chart indicates the number of people who have heart attacks every year in the US. Describe the main feature of the chart and make comparison where relevant v. 2
The given bar chart illustrates the annual number of men and women of 3 age groups who suffer from heart attacks in the USA.
Generally, the older people are, the higher risk of heart attacks they have. In addition, in all age group, men are more vulnerable to the disease than women, reflecting in the their higher number of patients in all age group.
Turning to the detail, in the age group of 29 to 44, 123 thousand male patients have heart attack, while the figure for women is only 3 thousand. Regarding to the age group from 45 to 64, there are 424 thousand men who undergo heart attacks, while the similar medical situation was witnessed in a three-time lower frequency in women, with 136 thousand cases.
When people turn to older than 65 years old, the risk of heart attack reaches the highest point. To be more specific, number of cases suffered by both male and female person upsurge, at 440 and 374 thousand, respectively.
The
given
bar chart illustrates the annual number of
men
and
women
of 3
age
groups
who suffer from
heart
attacks
in the USA.
Generally
, the older
people
are, the higher
risk
of
heart
attacks
they have.
In addition
, in all
age
group
,
men
are more vulnerable to the disease than
women
, reflecting in
the their higher
number of patients in all
age
group.
Turning to the detail, in the
age
group
of 29 to 44, 123 thousand male patients have
heart
attack
, while the figure for
women
is
only
3 thousand.
Regarding to
the
age
group
from 45 to 64, there are 424 thousand
men
who undergo
heart
attacks
, while the similar medical situation
was witnessed
in a three-time lower frequency in
women
, with 136 thousand cases.
When
people
turn to older than 65 years
old
, the
risk
of
heart
attack
reaches the highest point. To be more specific, number of cases suffered by both male and female person upsurge, at 440 and 374 thousand,
respectively
.
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