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The two column charts below show the percentage of food and other items bought by three European countries in 1998 and 2008. v.2

The two column charts below show the percentage of food and other items bought by three European countries in 1998 and 2008. v. 2
The bar charts compare the difference in the comsumption of food and other items in three major European nations in the years 1998 and 2008. It is clear from the given charts that there was a soar in the percentage of items bought in three nations over the period. While Norway inhabitants tended to buy food considerably higher, the other items appeared to be comsumed much more by Polland. In 1998, about 15 per cent of food was bought in Norway. This figure tripled after a decade, to just below 45 per cent. Meanwhile, the percentages of food consumed by Polland residents and the British in the first stage were just around 8 per cent and 5 per cent, followed by a dramatic rise by approxinately 20 per cent, to 30 per cent and 25 per cent, respectively. The consumption for other items was by far highest in Polland, where about 13 per cent was bought in 1998, then continued rising to 35 per cent in the final year surveyed. Norway and UK, on the other hand, had the smaller comsumption rates, where they witnessed an upward trend from only 7 per cent and 3 per cent in 1998 to 20 per cent and 18 per cent, respectively after 10 years.
The bar charts compare the difference in the
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comsumption
of
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food
and
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other
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items
in three major European nations in the years 1998 and 2008.

It is
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clear
from the
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given
charts that there was a soar in the percentage of
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items
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bought
in three nations over the period. While Norway inhabitants tended to
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buy
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food
considerably
higher, the
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other
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items
appeared to be
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comsumed
much more by
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Polland
.

In 1998, about 15 per cent of
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food
was
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bought
in Norway. This figure tripled after a decade, to
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just
below 45 per cent. Meanwhile, the percentages of
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food
consumed by
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Polland
residents and the British in the
first
stage were
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just
around 8 per cent and 5 per cent, followed by a dramatic rise by
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approxinately
20 per cent, to 30 per cent and 25 per cent,
respectively
.

The consumption for
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other
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items
was by far highest in
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Polland
, where about 13 per cent was
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bought
in 1998, then continued rising to 35 per cent in the final year surveyed. Norway and UK, on the
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other
hand, had the smaller
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comsumption
rates, where they witnessed an upward trend from
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only
7 per cent and 3 per cent in 1998 to 20 per cent and 18 per cent,
respectively
after 10 years.
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IELTS academic The two column charts below show the percentage of food and other items bought by three European countries in 1998 and 2008. v. 2

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