The stipulated pie diagrams illustrates the information regarding the ages of population in 2000 and the expected population in 2050 in Yemen and Italy. The mentioned parameters are 0-14 years, 15-59 years, 60+ years.
It has been clear from the data that, in 2000 Yemenis population was dominated by children and teenagers. They constituted more than half (50. 1%) of the total population. Adults and matured people accounted for almost half portion (46. 3%) of Yemen' s total community and a mere 3. 2% of folks were from senior citizens category. Whereas, in Italy 15-59 age group were responsible for almost three fourth (61. 6%) of the total public in 2000 followed by old age people (24. 1%) and 0-14 years (14. 3%) category.
On the other hand, 2050' s expected population rate is showing a complete different proportions. In Yemen, it is expected to increase the percentage of matured people by 9%. while 0-14 year age group' s strength will be decided by almost 13%. However Italy' s predicted figures showing some extraordinary trend, old age people' s proportion is expected to be doubled (42. 3%). However, 15-59 years category and 0-14 years category expected to experience some decline of 15% and 3% respectively.
In conclusion, both countries population proportion are expected to show a considerable change during the course of 50 years of time.
The stipulated pie diagrams illustrates the information regarding the
ages
of
population
in 2000 and the
expected
population
in 2050 in Yemen and Italy. The mentioned parameters are 0-14 years, 15-59 years, 60+ years.
It has been
clear
from the data that, in 2000 Yemenis
population
was dominated
by children and
teenagers
. They constituted more than half (50. 1%) of the total
population
. Adults and matured
people
accounted for almost half portion (46. 3%) of
Yemen&
#039; s total community and a mere 3. 2% of folks were from senior
citizens
category. Whereas, in Italy 15-59
age
group were responsible for almost three fourth (61. 6%) of the total public in 2000 followed by
old
age
people
(24. 1%) and 0-14 years (14. 3%) category.
On the other hand
, 2050' s
expected
population
rate is showing a complete
different
proportions. In Yemen, it is
expected
to increase the percentage of matured
people
by 9%.
while
0-14
year
age
group&
#039; s strength will
be decided
by almost 13%.
However
Italy&
#039; s predicted figures showing
some
extraordinary trend,
old
age
people&
#039; s proportion is
expected
to
be doubled
(42. 3%).
However
, 15-59 years category and 0-14 years category
expected
to experience
some
decline of 15% and 3%
respectively
.
In conclusion
, both
countries
population
proportion are
expected
to
show
a considerable
change
during the course of 50 years of time.
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