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The graph under show the percentage of student satisfaction of the staff in four colleges from 1991 to 2002 v.2

The graph under show the percentage of student satisfaction of the staff in four colleges from 1991 to 2002 v. 2
The line graph indicates the rating satisfaction of the staff in four colleges from 1992 to 2002 Overall, the rate satisfaction of the staff never got 100 percent. The rating was change, both of the college A and B had downward trends, while both of college B and D had upward trends In 1991-1993, the rate of college A grew from over 60% to 70% and then it went down. In 1995-1996 the percentage declined from over 80% to under 70% and it continued to decline. 1997-2000, the rate rose but it was not much, from 2000 to 2002 the percentage fell by 20%. College D, in 1991-1997 the rate was change but almosst it remained unchanged. In 1998-2001, the rate went down. In 2002 the percentage fell by 20% College B, 1992-1995 tha rate satisfaction of the staff fluctuated around 50%. 1996-1997 the rate jumped from 50% to 70%. In 1997-2002 the rate continued to rise. College C, 1991-1995 the percentage hover around over 30%, 1995-1998 the rate had a trough of 30% to 70%. In 1998-1999 the rate took off suddently by 60%, 1999-2002 the rate increasead steadily
The line graph indicates the rating satisfaction of the staff in four colleges from 1992 to 2002

Overall
, the
rate
satisfaction of the staff never
got
100 percent. The rating was
change
, both of the college A and B had downward trends, while both of college B and D had upward
trends


In 1991-1993, the
rate
of college A grew from over 60% to 70% and then it went down. In 1995-1996 the
percentage
declined from over 80% to under 70% and it continued to decline. 1997-2000, the
rate
rose
but
it was not much, from 2000 to 2002 the
percentage
fell by 20%. College D, in 1991-1997 the
rate
was
change
but
almosst
it remained unchanged. In 1998-2001, the
rate
went down. In 2002 the
percentage
fell by 20%

College B, 1992-1995
tha
rate
satisfaction of the staff fluctuated around 50%. 1996-1997 the
rate
jumped from 50% to 70%. In 1997-2002 the
rate
continued to rise. College C, 1991-1995 the
percentage
hover around over 30%, 1995-1998 the
rate
had a trough of 30% to 70%. In 1998-1999 the
rate
took off
suddently
by 60%, 1999-2002 the
rate
increasead
steadily
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph under show the percentage of student satisfaction of the staff in four colleges from 1991 to 2002 v. 2

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4 paragraphs
189 words
5.5
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