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The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050. v.1

The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050. v. 1
The given pie charts show data on the population ages in Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and also projected these portions of the population for the year 2050. According to the given data, more than half of the population of Yemen was below 14 years old in the year 2000. In this same year, their population from 15 to 59 years old was just over 46% and only about 3% of their population was over 60 years old. In this year there was one-fourth population in Italy over 60 years old and more than 60% of their population was from 15 to 59 years old. The percentage of aged people in Italy was much higher than Yemen in 2000. Finally, the percentage of the population up to 14 years in Italy was less than 15% in this year was. The pie charts also give the projection of the percentage of population based on age group for the year 2050 and according to this projection, the percentage of younger people in Yemen would decrease while the number of ag d people over 60 years would increase only by 2%. On the contrary, the aged people in Italy in 2050 would be more than 40% while they would have less young people.
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ages in Yemen and Italy in the
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2000 and
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projected these portions of the
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2050.

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of Yemen was below 14 years
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in the
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2000. In this same
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, their
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population
from 15 to 59 years
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46% and
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about 3% of their
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was
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over
60 years
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. In this
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year
there was one-fourth
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population
in Italy
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over
60 years
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and more than 60% of their
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population
was from 15 to 59 years
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. The
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of aged
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people
in Italy was much higher than Yemen in 2000.
Finally
, the
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of the
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up to 14 years in Italy was less than 15% in this
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was.

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give the projection of the
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of
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population
based on age group for the
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2050 and according to this projection, the
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percentage
of younger
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people
in Yemen would decrease while the number of
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60 years would increase
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in Italy in 2050 would be more than 40% while they would have less young
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IELTS academic The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050. v. 1

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