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The three charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialized countries in 1980 and 1990. v.2

The three charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialized countries in 1980 and 1990. v. 2
The three bar charts below illustrates information about the amount of time people spent at the school, the number of scientists and technical experts and expenditures on Research and Development in developing and developed nations in 1980 and 1990. Overall, the figures for developed nations were higher than those for developing nations. In addition, while the figures were presented with an upward trend in both developing and developed nations, the R& D investment in developing nations slightly decreased The amount of time people spent at school in developing and developed nations started at over 2. 5 and 3. 5 years in 1980 before climbing modestly to roughly 3. 5 and 10. 5 years in 1990. The number of scientists and technical experts in developing and developed nations had an difference, with over 10, 000 and 40, 000 people in 1980. While that of those in developing nations increased slightly to roughly 15, 000 people in 1990, the figures for developing nations witnessed a sharp growth, with roughly 70, 000 people in 1990. The R& D investment in developed nations experienced a twofold jump, from roughly 140 to 340 US billion dollars in 1980 and 1990. Conversely, those in developed nations halved from over 60 to 30 US billion dollars.
The three bar charts below illustrates information about the amount of time
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people
spent at the school, the number of scientists and technical experts and expenditures on Research and Development in
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developing
and
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developed
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nations
in 1980 and 1990.

Overall
, the figures for
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developed
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nations
were higher than those for
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developing
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nations
.
In addition
, while the figures
were presented
with an upward trend in both
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developing
and
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developed
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nations
, the
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; D investment in
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developing
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nations
slightly
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decreased


The amount of time
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people
spent at school in
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developing
and
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developed
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nations
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started
at over 2. 5 and 3. 5 years in 1980
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before
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modestly
to
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3. 5 and 10. 5 years in 1990.

The number of scientists and technical experts in
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developing
and
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developed
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nations
had
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an
difference, with over 10, 000 and 40, 000
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people
in 1980. While that of those in
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developing
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nations
increased
slightly
to
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roughly
15, 000
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people
in 1990, the figures for
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developing
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nations
witnessed a sharp growth, with
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roughly
70, 000
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people
in 1990.

The
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developed
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nations
experienced a twofold jump, from
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roughly
140 to 340 US
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billion
dollars in 1980 and 1990.
Conversely
, those in
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developed
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halved from over 60 to 30 US
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billion
dollars.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS academic The three charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialized countries in 1980 and 1990. v. 2

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209 words
5.5
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