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The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. v.4

The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. v. 4
The three bar charts provide data regarding the number of years which are spent, in average, in schools, figures reveal specialists and expenditures on analysis and improvement in developing ad industrialised countries. Figures are presented for two years at a difference of a decade and the first one is 1980. Overall, countries with an increased level of industry had bigger figures in both years, for all analysed elements. Moreover, figures increased in 1990 compared with 1980. On average, people spent approximately 2 years in schools in developing countries while 10 years later these figures almost doubled. On the other hand, in industrialised countries, which have far more schooling years, figures increased from 8. 2 to above 10. The same trends were when it came about technicians and scientists per 1000 people, with figures varying from 10 and 41 in 1980 to 18 and 70 in 1990, respectively. Comparing to industrialised investments on research in developing countries decreased from 50 billions of dollars to almost a half.
The three bar charts provide data regarding the number of years which
are spent
, in average, in schools,
figures
reveal specialists and expenditures on analysis and improvement in developing ad
industrialised
countries
.
Figures
are presented
for two years at a difference of a decade and the
first
one is 1980.

Overall
,
countries
with an increased level of industry had bigger
figures
in both years, for all
analysed
elements.
Moreover
,
figures
increased in 1990 compared with 1980. On average,
people
spent approximately 2 years in schools in developing
countries
while 10 years later these
figures
almost doubled.
On the other hand
, in
industrialised
countries
, which have far more schooling years,
figures
increased from 8. 2 to above 10. The same trends were when it came about technicians and scientists per 1000
people
, with
figures
varying
from 10 and 41
in 1980 to 18 and 70 in 1990,
respectively
. Comparing to
industrialised
investments on research in developing
countries
decreased from
50 billions of
dollars to almost a half.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS academic The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. v. 4

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