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The tables below show the information about the average hours worked by part time and full time male ans female workers in three different countries of Europe, in 2002. v.1

The tables below show the information about the average hours worked by part time and full time male ans female workers in three different countries of Europe, in 2002. v. 1
The tables demonstrate the info regarding the typical hours worked by half time and full time male and feminine employees in Greece, the Netherlands and also the kingdom within the year of 2002. Overall, on average in Europe, the number of hours worked full time by girls was less than that of men. However, within the case of part-time job, the other was true. In 2002, the number of hours worked full time by men and women in Greece was the highest. The figure were 42. 2 and 42. 2 respectively. On the contrary, 41. 3 and 40. 1 hours were worked by girls and men in part time jobs respectively. An equivalent range of hours was worked in a very regular job by men and ladies within the Netherlands and it had been 38. On the opposite hand, the numbers of hours worked part-time by girls and men were 29. 5 and 26. 3 consecutively within the same country. In the UK, men and girls did their half time job hours per week was the bottom and therefore the numbers were 18. 5 and 20 accordingly. Whereas in terms of full time job, there had been women(39. 6 hours) and men (41. 5 hours) worked per week on the average.
The tables demonstrate the info regarding the typical
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male and feminine employees in Greece, the Netherlands and
also
the kingdom within the year of 2002.

Overall
, on average in Europe, the
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of
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worked
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full
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girls
was less than that of
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.
However
, within the case of part-time
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job
, the other was true.

In 2002, the
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worked
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and women in Greece was the highest. The figure were 42. 2 and 42. 2
respectively
.
On the contrary
, 41. 3 and 40. 1
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were worked
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in part
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respectively
. An equivalent range of
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was worked
in a
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very
regular
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and ladies within the Netherlands and it had been 38. On the opposite hand, the
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of
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worked part-time by
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girls
and
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were 29. 5 and 26. 3
consecutively
within the same country.

In the UK,
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did their half
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per week was the bottom and
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were 18. 5 and 20
accordingly
. Whereas in terms of
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, there had been women(39. 6
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and
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(41. 5
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worked per week on the average.
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40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The tables below show the information about the average hours worked by part time and full time male ans female workers in three different countries of Europe, in 2002. v. 1

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211 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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