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The chart below shows the number of travelers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The chart below shows the number of travelers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
The bar chart compares the number of airport visitors in three major airport of New York between 1995 and 2000. Overall, it can be seen that the number of passengers travelled via JF airport was fluctuated while LG and NW airport saw an upward trend during the six-year period. Another noticeable fact is that in the end of the period, LG was the most widely used airport. Looking at the detail, the number of travelers used JF airport was well above 20 million in 1995 then swiftly increased until reached the vertex at just below 50 million in 1997. After that, JF airport experienced a drop in visitors during 1998 and 1999. In 2000, JF airport had a remarkable comeback with more than 40 million passengers. Turning our attention to NW airport, it started at approximately 16 million travelers in 1995. The number the rocketed to more than 40 million in 1998 and maintained the same level till 2000. On the other hand, the number of LG airport passengers was steadily climbed and reached 50 million in 1999. One year after 1999, there was a boom in number of visitors which resulted in nearly 70 million visitors in 2000.
The bar chart compares the
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airport
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visitors
in three major
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of New York between 1995 and 2000.

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, it can be
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seen
that the
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number
of passengers travelled via
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JF
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airport
was fluctuated
while LG and NW
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airport
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saw
an upward trend during the six-year period. Another noticeable fact is that in the
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end
of the period, LG was the most
widely
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used
airport.

Looking at the detail, the
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number
of travelers
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used
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JF
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airport
was well above 20
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million
in 1995 then
swiftly
increased until reached the vertex at
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just
below 50
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million
in 1997. After that,
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JF
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airport
experienced a drop in
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visitors
during 1998 and 1999. In 2000,
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JF
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airport
had a remarkable comeback with more than 40
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million
passengers.

Turning our attention to NW
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airport
, it
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started
at approximately 16
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million
travelers in 1995. The
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number
the rocketed to more than 40
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million
in 1998 and maintained the same level till 2000.
On the other hand
, the
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number
of LG
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airport
passengers was
steadily
climbed and reached 50
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million
in 1999. One year after 1999, there was a boom in
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number
of
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visitors
which resulted in
nearly
70
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million
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visitors
in 2000.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of travelers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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