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The tables and pie chart show in percentage terms of the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand. v.2

The tables and pie chart show in percentage terms of the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand. v. 2
The tables show the satisfaction level of survey participants about the quality of shops and restaurants of a new shopping plaza in Auckland, New Zeland while the pie chart depicts how satisfied they were about the design of this shopping complex. Overall, more men thought that the restaurant was good than that of females while a majority of the shoppers said that they liked the design of this mall. According to the given illustration, around half of the male survey takers were satisfied with the quality of the shops while 17% of them were very satisfied. On the other hand, over two-thirds of the females said that they were either satisfied or quite satisfied with the stores. Exactly One-fifth of the males and females were dissatisfied with the shops. Now regarding the restaurants, more than half of the males opined that they were satisfied with them while a male out of four was more than satisfied. The objection level of the men about the restaurant was quite ignorable, only 5% to be precise, and this percentage was slightly less than one-fourth of the dissatisfied females with the restaurant quality. A few participants did not comment on the shopping complex's shop and dining quality which ranges from 9 to 20 percentages for males and females. More than six participants out of every ten expressed their satisfaction with the design of this shopping mall while exactly 17% were very contented about it. One in every ten people did not comment on the design while a very similar proportion of people showed their dissatisfactions.
The tables
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show
the satisfaction level of survey participants about the
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quality
of
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shops
and
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restaurants
of a new
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shopping
plaza in Auckland, New
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Zeland
while the pie chart depicts how
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satisfied
they were about the
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design
of this
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shopping
complex.
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, more
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men
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thought
that the
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restaurant
was
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good
than that of
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females
while a majority of the shoppers said that they liked the
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design
of this mall.

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given
illustration, around half of the male survey takers were
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satisfied
with the
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quality
of the
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shops
while 17% of them were
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very
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satisfied
.
On the other hand
, over two-thirds of the
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females
said that they were either
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satisfied
or quite
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satisfied
with the stores. Exactly One-fifth of the
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males
and
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females
were dissatisfied
with the
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shops
.
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Now
regarding the
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restaurants
, more than half of the
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males
opined that they were
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satisfied
with them while a male out of four was more than
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satisfied
. The objection level of the
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men
about the
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restaurant
was quite ignorable,
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only
5% to be precise, and this percentage was
slightly
less than one-fourth of the dissatisfied
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females
with the
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restaurant
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quality
. A few participants did not comment on the
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shopping
complex's
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shop
and dining
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quality
which ranges from 9 to 20 percentages for
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males
and females.

More than six participants out of every ten expressed their satisfaction with the
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design
of this
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shopping
mall while exactly 17% were
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very
contented about it. One in every ten
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people
did not comment on the
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design
while a
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very
similar proportion of
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people
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showed
their
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dissatisfactions
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic The tables and pie chart show in percentage terms of the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand. v. 2

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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