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The graph below shows the area of land from which grain was harvested. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph. v.1

The graph below shows the area of land from which grain was harvested. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph. v. 1
The line graph gives data on the grain harvesting areas worldwide over a period of 46 years, commencing from 1950. As an overall trend, the area of land in which the seed was cultivated throughout the world increased during the period and land programmes initiated by the USSR, grain price increase and retrenchment affected the land area in which farmers grew the crops. As can be seen from the given line graph, just below 600 million hectares of the land area was used to grow different grains in 1950 and the USSR Virgin land programme initiation positively affected the total lands devoted to cultivating grains. This programme was initiated around 1955 and as a result, the total cultivable lands increased to around 650 million hectares in 1960. In the next ten years, the total grain harvesting lands gradually increased with some minor fluctuations. The grain price doubles in 1975 and due to this the land for grain harvesting also soared to the peak with approximately 750 million hectares. The retrenchment affected negatively to the land area for grain harvesting and reduced the land to around 700 million hectares in 1990. With some oscillations, the total grain harvesting lands stood at just over 700 million hectares after 1990.
The line graph gives data on the
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grain
harvesting
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areas
worldwide over a period of 46 years, commencing from 1950. As an
overall
trend, the
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area
of
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land
in which the seed
was cultivated
throughout the world increased during the period and
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land
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programmes
initiated by the USSR,
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grain
price increase and retrenchment
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affected
the
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land
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area
in which farmers grew the crops.

As can be
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seen
from the
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given
line graph,
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just
below 600
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million
hectares of the
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land
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area
was
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used
to grow
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different
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grains
in 1950 and the USSR Virgin
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land
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programme
initiation
positively
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affected
the
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total
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lands
devoted to cultivating
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grains
. This
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programme
was initiated
around 1955 and
as a result
, the
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total
cultivable
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lands
increased to around 650
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million
hectares in 1960. In the
next
ten years, the
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total
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grain
harvesting
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lands
gradually
increased with
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some
minor fluctuations. The
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grain
price doubles in 1975 and due to this the
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land
for
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grain
harvesting
also
soared to the peak with approximately 750
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million
hectares. The retrenchment
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affected
negatively
to the
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land
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area
for
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grain
harvesting and
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reduced
the
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land
to around 700
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million
hectares in 1990. With
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some
oscillations, the
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total
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grain
harvesting
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lands
stood at
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just
over 700
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million
hectares after 1990.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the area of land from which grain was harvested. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph. v. 1

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
207 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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