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The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. v.2

The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. v. 2
The column graph compares the male and female research students in a UK university in six science-major subjects in the year 2009. As a general trend, biology and medicine were preferred by both sexes while physics and astronomy were picked by male research students in this university. As is obvious from the given illustration, physics, astronomy and geology were mostly picked by the male research pupils while veterinary medicine as a subject was mostly preferred by females. While more than 200 male took physics, only about 40 female did so and a similar trend could be observed in the case of astronomy and geology. The highest number of students took biology as the number of students in this subject exceeded 400. Medicine was the second preferred subjects by the students of this university with exactly 200 male and about 175 female students. The only subject which got more female students than male was veterinary medicine in which more than 100 female enrolled compared to the just about 90 male students. The number of male research students in this UK university was approximately one thousand while it was about 550 for female.
The column graph compares the male and
female
research
students
in a UK university in six science-major
subjects
in the year 2009. As a general trend, biology and
medicine
were preferred
by both sexes while physics and astronomy
were picked
by male
research
students
in this university.

As is obvious from the
given
illustration, physics, astronomy and geology were
mostly
picked by the male
research
pupils while veterinary
medicine
as a
subject
was
mostly
preferred by
females
. While more than 200 male took physics,
only
about 40
female
did
so
and a similar trend could
be observed
in the case of astronomy and geology. The highest number of
students
took biology as the number of
students
in this
subject
exceeded 400.
Medicine
was the second preferred
subjects
by the
students
of this university with exactly 200 male and about 175
female
students
. The
only
subject
which
got
more
female
students
than male was veterinary
medicine
in which more than 100
female
enrolled compared to the
just
about 90 male
students
. The number of male
research
students
in this UK university was approximately one thousand while it was about 550 for
female
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. v. 2

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