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The graph below shows the area of land from which grain was harvested. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph. v.2

The graph below shows the area of land from which grain was harvested. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph. v. 2
The line graph presents data on the worldwide grain harvesting area from 1950 to 1996. As is clear from the given illustration, global grain harvesting areas increased gradually and grain price, land programmes and retrenchment had effects on the land area where grain was harvested. According to the given illustration, just below 600 million hectares land was used globally to grow different crops. The USSR Virgin Lands Program was launched after 1950 and it increased the total land area for agricultural cultivations. The gradual increases with some fluctuations could be observed over the period and in 1970, harvested land area amounted over 650 million hectares. The grain price was doubled around 1974-75 and that contributed towards increasing harvesting areas. The highest land area for harvesting could be observed in 1998 when it was about 750 million hectares. From 1980 till the year 1996 retrenchment decreased the global harvested area and in 1996 it was around 670 million hectares.
The line graph presents data on the worldwide
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harvesting
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area
from 1950 to 1996. As is
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clear
from the
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illustration, global
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grain
harvesting
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areas
increased
gradually
and
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grain
price,
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land
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programmes
and retrenchment had effects on the
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land
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area
where
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grain
was harvested
.

According to the
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illustration,
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just
below 600
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million
hectares
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land
was
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used
globally to grow
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different
crops. The USSR Virgin
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Lands
Program
was launched
after 1950 and it increased the total
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land
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area
for agricultural
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cultivations
. The gradual increases with
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some
fluctuations could
be observed
over the period and in 1970, harvested
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land
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area
amounted over 650
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million
hectares.
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The
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grain
price
was doubled
around 1974-75 and that contributed towards increasing harvesting
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areas
.
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The
highest
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land
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area
for harvesting could
be observed
in 1998 when it was about 750
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million
hectares. From 1980 till the year 1996 retrenchment decreased the global harvested
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area
and in 1996 it was around 670
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hectares.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the area of land from which grain was harvested. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph. v. 2

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
158 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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