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The table shows the percentage of literacy and employment in different countries in the 1990s and 2010s Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.1

The table shows the percentage of literacy and employment in different countries in the 1990s and 2010s
The table chart compares five different countries, namely USA, China, UK, Australia and India in terms of the proportion of literacy and employment between 1990 and 2010. In general, there was a considerable increase in the percentage of literate people in different countries over the period shown. In addition, the proportion of employees in USA and India saw the most dramatic growth from 1990 to 2010. The most dramatically rise in literate population was seen in China. The percentage of literacy in China was the lowest in the 1990s, at 42%, whereas the figure for China was over 90% in the 2010s. By contrast, USA witnessed the lowest rate of increase in literacy from 1990 to 2010 was only around 20%. The proportion of Australian who could read and write was the highest in the 2010s, which went up from 49% in the 1990s to 95% in the 2010s. UK and India were similar, which rose by around 30% during this period. Throughout the period shown, the percentage of workers in USA, India and Australia experienced an upward trend, while the figure for China and UK saw a downward trend. Both the figure for employment in USA and India went up rapidly by 40% from 1990 to 2010 compare with the percentage of Australian workers increased minimally by 2% over the same period. The proportion for UK was the highest employment in the 1990s, which stood at almost 80%, after falling to 60% in the 2010s. The figure for Chinese employees declined slightly by about 5% over the period shown.
The table chart compares five
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different
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USA, China, UK, Australia and India in terms of the
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proportion
of literacy and employment between 1990 and 2010.

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, there was a considerable increase in the
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percentage
of literate
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people
in
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different
countries
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over
the
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period
shown.
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, the
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proportion
of employees
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in USA
and India
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saw
the most dramatic growth from 1990 to 2010.

The most
dramatically
rise in literate population was
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seen
in China. The
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percentage
of literacy in China was the lowest in the 1990s, at 42%, whereas the
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figure
for China was
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over
90% in the 2010s. By contrast, USA witnessed the lowest rate of increase in literacy from 1990 to 2010 was
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only
around 20%. The
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proportion
of Australian who could read and write was the highest in the 2010s, which went up from 49% in the 1990s to 95% in the 2010s. UK and India were similar, which rose by around 30% during this period.

Throughout the
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period
shown, the
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percentage
of workers
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in USA
, India and Australia experienced an upward trend, while the
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figure
for China and UK
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saw
a downward trend. Both the
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figure
for employment
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in USA
and India went up
rapidly
by 40% from 1990 to 2010 compare with the
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percentage
of Australian workers increased
minimally
by 2%
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over
the same
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period
. The
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proportion
for UK was the highest employment in the 1990s, which stood at almost 80%, after falling to 60% in the 2010s. The
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figure
for Chinese employees declined
slightly
by about 5%
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over
the
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period
shown.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS academic The table shows the percentage of literacy and employment in different countries in the 1990s and 2010s

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4 paragraphs
260 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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