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The graphs below show the changes in literacy rates in an African country between 1950 and 2010. Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The graphs below show the changes in literacy rates in an African country between 1950 and 2010. Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant v. 2
The graphs present the literacy changes rates in an African country between 1950 and 2010. In 1950 African country age group literacy rates has increased gradually. In case of in 1970 after twenty years their literacy level has been climbed sharply. The age group of 0-20 years old and 41-60 years old literacy rates were matched each other which is 50% and also middle age group raised from 25% to 45% almost. In other hand, in 1990 literacy rate has been dropped slowly according to age group average, but comparing with the previous 20 years the age group of 0-20 year old literacy rates has raised rapidly which is 80% from 25% and also other groups age literacy level were 70% and 65% almost respectively from 35% and 40%. Finally, in 2010 after 60 years in an African country literacy rates has changes rapidly and reached on top level in every age groups which were 100% for both age group 0-20 age and 21-40 age. More ever 41-60 age group literacy rate was almost 95%
The graphs present the
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in an African country between 1950 and 2010.

In 1950 African country
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has increased
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level has
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of 0-20 years
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and 41-60 years
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were matched
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middle
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raised from 25% to 45% almost.

In other hand, in 1990
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has
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average,
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comparing with the previous 20 years the
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of 0-20
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has raised
rapidly
which is 80% from 25% and
also
other
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level were 70% and 65% almost
respectively
from 35% and 40%.

Finally
, in 2010 after 60 years in an African country
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which were 100% for both
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0-20
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and 21-40
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. More ever 41-60
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was almost 95%
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the changes in literacy rates in an African country between 1950 and 2010. Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant v. 2

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