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The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. v.2

The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. v. 2
The given bar graph and chart show one country' s export of different items and percentage change in export of the respective items in 2015 and 2016. Overall, while a few items, namely petroleum products, engineered textiles, have shown growth in export 2016 compare to exports in 2015, some items like germs and jewelry has decreased in export. The textile export increased from approximately $26 billion in 2015 to $31 billion in 2016. Similar increase can be visible in the items like petroleum products and engineered textiles which are increased from $61 billion to $63 billion and $58 billion to $61 billion respectively. If we look at the percentage increase in export in each product from 2015 to 2016, the growth in textiles was the highest, which is 15. 24% followed by engineered goods and petroleum products, which are stand at 8. 5% and 3% respectively. Moreover, agriculture products were also experience at slight increase of 0. 81%. However, product such as Gems and jewelry was exported less in 2016, which was 5. 18% lower than that of export in 2015
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in 2015 and 2016.

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petroleum
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, engineered
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textiles
, have shown growth in
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2016 compare to
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in 2015,
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like germs and jewelry has decreased in export.

The
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textile
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export
increased from approximately $26
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billion
in 2015 to $31
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billion
in 2016. Similar increase can be visible in the
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items
like petroleum
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products
and engineered
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textiles
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to $63
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and $58
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to $61
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in each
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from 2015 to 2016, the growth in
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textiles
was the highest, which is 15. 24% followed by engineered
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, which are stand at 8. 5% and 3%
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at slight increase of 0. 81%.
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such as Gems and jewelry
was exported
less in 2016, which was 5. 18% lower than that of
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in 2015
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. v. 2

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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