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The table shows the expenditure on various types of food in one European country in 1992, 2002 and 2012. The amount spent on various foodstuffs in Italy (millions of euros) 199220022012Beef454354Chicken384156Butter/margarine898Potatoes111418Coffee977Milk13 v.2

The table shows the expenditure on various types of food in one European country in 1992, 2002 and 2012. The amount spent on various foodstuffs in Italy (millions of euros) 199220022012Beef454354Chicken384156Butter/margarine898Potatoes111418Coffee977Milk13 v. 2
The chart compares and contrasts the data on the changes in the quantity of money which the Italian used for eating 6 kinds of food over three years (1992, 2002 and 2012). Generally, there was an upward trend in 4 categories including beef, chicken, potatoes and milk, whereas coffee witnessed a downward one. it is clear that the expenditures on chicken and potatoes experienced a significant increase during the two decades, it rose by 18 and 7 millions of euros, respectively. Besides, although the amount spent on beef reached a nadir at 41 millions of euros in 2002, the trend still grew to 54 millions of euros in 2012. Moreover, a remarkable fluctuation was recorded in the Italian spending on milk, reducing to 10 millions of euros in 2002 and climbing by 4 millions of euros at the end of the period. On the other hand, only the figure for coffee decreased by 2 millions of euros from 1992 to 2002 and then it stabilized at 7 millions of euros for the next 10 years. Meanwhile, the money spending on butter/margarine remained unchanged at 8 millions of euros although it also had a marginal increase in 2002.
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the figure for coffee decreased by 2
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IELTS academic The table shows the expenditure on various types of food in one European country in 1992, 2002 and 2012. The amount spent on various foodstuffs in Italy (millions of euros) 199220022012Beef454354Chicken384156Butter/margarine898Potatoes111418Coffee977Milk13 v. 2

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