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The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected sales for 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. v.4

The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected sales for 2020.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of magazines was bought per head in five different countries in 2000 and 2010, with sales forecast for 2020. Overall, country B accounted for the highest number of magazines sold per person while the countries E always occupied the lowest place. For the country A, the quantity of magazines was purchased was 49 in 2010 and declined to 44 in 2010. In 2020, the amount of magazines sold is predicted to fall to 48. Similarly, the country B had the quantity of magazines sold per person reduced slightly from 50 in 2000 to 47 in 2010 and it is expected to drop to 46 in 2020. Likewise, the country C also showed a similar trend. The amount of magazines sold per head decreased from 47 in 2000 to 45 in 2010 and is forecasted to continue dipping to 43 in 2020. In contrast, the country D has an upward trend. The number of magazines per person was 17 in 2000 and rise to 19 in 2010. It is projected to increase to 22 in 2020. Meanwhile, the amount of magazines sold per person of country fluctuated over the time. It was 7 in 2000 and rise to 9 in 2010. The figure leveled off and is expected to go down to 7 in 2020
The bar chart illustrates the
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different
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in 2000 and 2010, with sales forecast for 2020.

Overall
,
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country
B accounted for the highest number of
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magazines
sold per
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person
while the
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countries
E always occupied the lowest place.

For the
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country
A, the quantity of
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magazines
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purchased
was 49 in 2010 and declined to 44 in 2010. In 2020, the
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amount
of
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magazines
sold
is predicted
to fall to 48.
Similarly
, the
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country
B had the quantity of
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magazines
sold per
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person
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reduced
slightly
from 50 in 2000 to 47 in 2010 and it is
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expected
to drop to 46 in 2020.
Likewise
, the
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C
also
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showed
a similar trend. The
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amount
of
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magazines
sold per head decreased from 47 in 2000 to 45 in 2010 and
is forecasted
to continue dipping to 43 in 2020.

In contrast
, the
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country
D has an upward trend. The number of
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magazines
per
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person
was 17 in 2000 and rise to 19 in 2010. It
is projected
to increase to 22 in 2020. Meanwhile, the
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amount
of
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magazines
sold per
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person
of
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country
fluctuated over the time. It was 7 in 2000 and rise to 9 in 2010. The figure leveled off and is
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IELTS academic The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected sales for 2020.

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