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The table shows source of student income over ten year period in the United KingdomWrite a report a university lecturer describing the information shown below. v.2

The table shows source of student income over ten year period in the United KingdomWrite a report a university lecturer describing the information shown below. v. 2
The table shows the the trend which took place in student income in the United Kingdom during the ten-year period from 1988 to 1999. Even though the data of student loan is not presented in 1988/89, there was a dramatic increase from 8% in 1992/93 to 24% in 1998/99. The percentage of earnings also rose sharply from 6% in 1988/89 and reached the peak at 14% in 1995/96, then fell slightly by 2% in 1998/99. On the other hand, there was a steep fall in parental contribution from 32% in 1988/89 to 16% in 1998/99. At the same time, grant went down by 24% from 38% in 1988/89 to 14% in 1998/99. Overall, the annual income per student rose gradually from 4, 39 pounds in 1988/89 to 5. 75 pounds in 1998/99, and there was a shift from being dependent to independent off the student at that period.
The table
shows
the the
trend which took place in
student
income in the United Kingdom during the ten-year period from 1988 to 1999.

Even though
the data of
student
loan is not presented in 1988/89, there was a dramatic increase from 8% in 1992/93 to 24% in 1998/99. The percentage of earnings
also
rose
sharply
from 6% in 1988/89 and reached the peak at 14% in 1995/96, then fell
slightly
by 2% in 1998/99.

On the other hand
, there was a steep fall in parental contribution from 32% in 1988/89 to 16% in 1998/99. At the same time, grant went down by 24% from 38% in 1988/89 to 14% in 1998/99.

Overall
, the annual income per
student
rose
gradually
from 4,
39 pounds
in 1988/89 to 5.
75 pounds
in 1998/99, and there was a shift from being dependent to independent off the
student
at that period.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic The table shows source of student income over ten year period in the United KingdomWrite a report a university lecturer describing the information shown below. v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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