The following bar chart illustrates the mobile phone ownership in ten European countries throughout the year from 2005 to 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. v.2
The following bar chart illustrates the mobile phone ownership in ten European countries throughout the year from 2005 to 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. v. 2
The bar chart shows the figure of mobile phone users in ten European countries during 2005 to 2010.
It can be seen from the graph that the figure of users in 2010 were higher than in 2005.
In 2005, the United Kingdom had the highest number of people who own mobile phone, with more than 4 million people, in the next 5 years, the number rose to 12 million. German and Italian owned mobile phone with the figure nearly as same as British in 2005. However, in 2010, the number for Germany peaked at around 14 million users. The figure for sweden, france, Finland, Norway, Denmark and Spain fluctuated between 1 million and 2 million people in 2005. Though, sweden and france had higher number of owners in the next 5 years. In contrast, Netherlands had a lowest figure in 2005 but increased slightly during 5 years.
Overall, we can see that people are more and more have own mobile phone for themselves.
The bar chart
shows
the
figure
of mobile
phone
users in ten European countries during 2005 to 2010.
It can be
seen
from the graph that the
figure
of users in 2010 were higher than in 2005.
In 2005, the United Kingdom had the highest
number
of
people
who
own
mobile
phone
, with more than 4
million
people
, in the
next
5 years, the
number
rose to 12
million
. German and Italian
owned
mobile
phone
with the
figure
nearly
as same as British in 2005.
However
, in 2010, the
number
for Germany peaked at around 14
million
users. The
figure
for
sweden
,
france
, Finland, Norway, Denmark and Spain fluctuated between 1
million
and 2
million
people
in 2005. Though,
sweden
and
france
had higher
number
of owners in the
next
5 years.
In contrast
, Netherlands had
a
lowest
figure
in 2005
but
increased
slightly
during 5 years.
Overall
, we can
see
that
people
are more and more have
own
mobile
phone
for themselves.
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