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The table below shows the average annual percentages of water pollution I four large cities in 2003. Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The table below shows the average annual percentages of water pollution I four large cities in 2003. Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v. 2
The table reveals the water pollution in four big cities by major pollutants of yearly average percentage in 2003. According to table most cities polluted by domestic sewage. Sao Paulo is the highest polluted city by their own domestic sewage, it is about 65%. Tokyo was the lowest polluted city which was 23% only and other two cities are almost middle percentages. IN case of by pesticides pollution. Tokyo city was most pollute place 31% and lowest was Sao Paulo 9%. In term of polluted by erosion and phosphates in detergents New York is the highest place almost 56% and lowest city was Taipei. Tokyo was second highest polluted city by those type of pollution. It is about 46% in total and second lowest city was Sao Paulo.
The table reveals the water pollution in four
big
cities
by major pollutants of yearly average percentage in 2003.

According to table most
cities
polluted
by domestic sewage.
Sao Paulo
is the highest
polluted
city by their
own
domestic sewage, it is about 65%. Tokyo was the
lowest
polluted
city which was 23%
only
and other two
cities
are almost middle percentages. IN case of by
pesticides
pollution. Tokyo city was most pollute place 31% and
lowest
was
Sao Paulo
9%. In term of
polluted
by erosion and phosphates in detergents New York is the highest place almost 56% and
lowest
city was Taipei.

Tokyo was second highest
polluted
city by those type of pollution. It is about 46% in total and second
lowest
city was
Sao Paulo
.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic The table below shows the average annual percentages of water pollution I four large cities in 2003. Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v. 2

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