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The table below shows the consumer durables telephone refrigerator etc owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below v.1

The table below shows the consumer durables telephone refrigerator etc owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below v. 1
The table indicates the percentage of durable goods owned by households in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Based on the table, the percentage of households owning a central heating throughout the years showed an increasing trend from approximately 30% to 64%. The percentage in 1983 was doubled the percentage in 1972. The similar trend occurred on the durable good, telephone in which its percentage in 1972 and 1983 were 42% and 77% respectively. Television was the durable good with the highest percentage of ownership in the households over the course of years in contrast to the other goods. The table showed the percentages of television between 1972 and 1983 were in the range of 93% and 98%. One of the most striking features portrayed by the table was that the vacuum cleaner was having a rise in its percentage owning by households from the year 1972 to the year 1982 with the exception that the percentage in 1983 was zero percent. The dishwasher was owned by households since 1978 with a percentage of 3% and its percentage remained constant in the remaining years. Another surprising feature worth to mention was that the video was owned by households only in 1983 with a percentage of 18%. The other two consumer durables which were refrigerator and washing machine were showing an inkling trend throughout the years. It is said the trends of these two durable goods were similar to the trends of central heating and telephone.
The
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table
indicates the
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percentage
of
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durable
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goods
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owned
by
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households
in Britain from 1972 to 1983.

Based on the
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table
, the
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percentage
of
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households
owning a central heating throughout the years
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showed
an increasing
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trend
from approximately 30% to 64%. The
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percentage
in 1983
was doubled
the
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percentage
in 1972. The similar
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trend
occurred on the
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durable
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good
, telephone in which its
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percentage
in 1972 and 1983 were 42% and 77%
respectively
. Television was the
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durable
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good
with the highest
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percentage
of ownership in the
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households
over the course of years
in contrast
to the other
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goods
. The
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table
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showed
the
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percentages
of television between 1972 and 1983 were in the range of 93% and 98%.

One of the most striking features portrayed by the
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table
was that the vacuum cleaner was having a rise in its
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percentage
owning by
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households
from the
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year
1972 to the
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year
1982 with the exception that the
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percentage
in 1983 was zero percent. The dishwasher was
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owned
by
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households
since 1978 with a
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percentage
of 3% and its
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percentage
remained constant in the remaining years. Another surprising feature worth to mention was that the video was
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owned
by
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households
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only
in 1983 with a
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percentage
of 18%. The other two consumer
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durables
which were refrigerator and washing machine were showing an inkling
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trend
throughout the years. It
is said
the
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trends
of these two
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durable
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goods
were similar to the
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trends
of central heating and telephone.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic The table below shows the consumer durables telephone refrigerator etc owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below v. 1

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
244 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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