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The chart below show the percentage of female and male teachers in six different types of educational setting in UK in 2010. v.2

The chart below show the percentage of female and male teachers in six different types of educational setting in UK in 2010. v. 2
The line graph below illustrates the comparison the percentage of men and women teacher in six different varieties of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Overall, it is able to the most obvious information that girls absolutely prefer to select nursery or pre school whilst the boys tend to choose university. Regarding to the data, the most popular demand component by ladies was the nursery or pre-school which stood at almost 100%, the same with primary school close to 90%. Furthermore, in university became the most decreased part on the period. Only went down about 75% lower. While on secondary school, college and private training institute also falling significantly to between 60% and 40% approximately. Unlike with the case above, the guy happened to most sharply increased progress that started from nursery get 0, 1%, it reached a peak to 0, 5% in university dramatically. Then, the second biggest proportion in private training institute counted at 45%.
The line graph below illustrates the comparison the percentage of
men
and women teacher in six
different
varieties of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

Overall
, it is able to the most obvious information that girls
absolutely
prefer to select nursery or
pre
school whilst the boys tend to choose university.

Regarding to
the data, the most popular demand component by ladies was the nursery or
pre-school
which stood at almost 100%, the same with primary school close to 90%.
Furthermore
, in university became the most decreased part on the period.
Only
went down about 75% lower. While on secondary school, college and private training institute
also
falling
significantly
to between 60% and 40% approximately.

Unlike with the case above, the guy happened to most
sharply
increased progress that
started
from nursery
get
0, 1%, it reached a peak to 0, 5% in university
dramatically
. Then, the second biggest proportion in private training institute counted at 45%.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart below show the percentage of female and male teachers in six different types of educational setting in UK in 2010. v. 2

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