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IELTS Task 1 Tables give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries v.2

IELTS Task 1 Tables give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries v. 2
The tables compare the amount of coffee and the number of bananas purchased under the fairtrade label in five distinct nations between 1999 and 2004. Overall, both coffee and banana sales grew in almost all five countries in Europe in 2004, as compared to those in 1999. Moreover, while the UK was ranked top in the amount of coffee purchased, Switzerland was the best country of banana sales in 2004. In terms of coffee, the UK sold 1. 5 millions of Euros in 1999. The figure then rose tremendously five years later to 20 millions of Euros. Being the second largest coffee provider, Switzerland also experienced a significant growth, climbing from 3 millions in 1999 to 6 millions in 2004. The other three European countries, however, sold only 2, 1. 7, and 1 million(s) of Euro respectively in the same year, although they also witnessed moderate upward trends. As regards to bananas, Switzerland outnumbered other European countries in the number of bananas purchased in both given years (15 millions in 1999 and 47 millions in 2004). Likewise, there were dramatic increases in the sales of bananas from both the UK and Belgium, rising from 1 million and 0. 6 million in 1999 to 5. 5 millions and 4 millions in 2004 respectively. By contrast, the other two countries saw moderate drops, with merely 1 million for Sweden and 0. 9 million for Denmark in 2004.
The tables compare the amount of
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coffee
and the number of bananas
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purchased
under the
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fairtrade
label in five distinct nations between 1999 and 2004.

Overall
, both
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coffee
and banana sales grew in almost all five
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countries
in Europe in 2004, as compared to those in 1999.
Moreover
, while the UK
was ranked
top in the amount of
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coffee
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purchased
, Switzerland was the best
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country
of banana sales in 2004.

In terms of
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coffee
, the UK sold 1. 5
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millions
of Euros in 1999. The figure then rose
tremendously
five years later to 20
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millions
of Euros. Being the second largest
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coffee
provider, Switzerland
also
experienced a significant growth, climbing from 3
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millions
in 1999 to 6
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millions
in 2004. The other three European
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countries
,
however
, sold
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only
2, 1. 7, and 1
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million(s)
of Euro
respectively
in the same year, although they
also
witnessed moderate upward trends.

As regards to bananas, Switzerland outnumbered other European
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countries
in the number of bananas
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purchased
in both
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given
years (15
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millions
in 1999 and 47
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millions
in 2004).
Likewise
, there were dramatic increases in the sales of bananas from both the UK and Belgium, rising from 1
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million
and 0. 6
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million
in 1999 to 5. 5
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millions
and 4
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millions
in 2004
respectively
. By contrast, the other two
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countries
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saw
moderate drops, with
merely
1
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million
for Sweden and 0. 9
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million
for Denmark in 2004.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic IELTS Task 1 Tables give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
235 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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